I LOVE the fact that you brought Sarah Jane in at this point and I really love the way you handled the whole thing.
Do you think Sarah Jane should have given the Doctor a harder time? At any point in the Chaosverse?
I think you actually achieved the right balance here. Sarah Jane is perceptive enough to have picked up on the Doctor's emotional state here and I think she realized that there was only so far she could push him at this point. Plus she made it clear that she was still hurt by the way the Doctor had abandoned her but she still is willing to help him.
When I read your notes on this chapter for the first time tonight I have to admit that I actually got a bit teary. Earlier this evening I watched pt1 of the last ever SJA story. Part 2 airs tomorrow and I find it both surreal and heartbreaking to realize that these were the last moments Elisabeth Sladen was ever on film before she died. :( I'm glad that she can continue to live on through fandom in media like this though.
Part 2
Chapter 19
I LOVE the fact that you brought Sarah Jane in at this point and I really love the way you handled the whole thing.
Do you think Sarah Jane should have given the Doctor a harder time? At any point in the Chaosverse?
I think you actually achieved the right balance here. Sarah Jane is perceptive enough to have picked up on the Doctor's emotional state here and I think she realized that there was only so far she could push him at this point. Plus she made it clear that she was still hurt by the way the Doctor had abandoned her but she still is willing to help him.
When I read your notes on this chapter for the first time tonight I have to admit that I actually got a bit teary. Earlier this evening I watched pt1 of the last ever SJA story. Part 2 airs tomorrow and I find it both surreal and heartbreaking to realize that these were the last moments Elisabeth Sladen was ever on film before she died. :( I'm glad that she can continue to live on through fandom in media like this though.