ext_109399 ([identity profile] tracker-lucifer.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] earlgreytea68 2012-10-17 01:34 am (UTC)

You have made my day (by a lot). I admit, I am constantly looking at your lj in case you posted up another chapter because I looooovveee it.

Your Mycroft is truly a Holmes in his own way and has his own charm. I cannot wait for Lestrade to finally meet him in person and see how well that goes.

Sherlock and John, spot on despite them being young. I love that Sherlock is fawning (in his own way) over John and John is John. I like how he is being selfish by keeping the knowledge of Sherlock away from his sister.

Character execution, spot on. I love your execution of each of these characters and I feel charmed by them as I did in the actual show. Bravo, much bravo.

I have one question though, how old is John. I am not used to the British school system so I vaguely have an idea how old he is. Can you explain that one to me?

Also.... please please put up the next chapter soon. I am dying in anticipation!

Much hugz-n-snugz

Tracker_Lucifer

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