I love the idea of him being a leisurely lover, while she was inclined to be impatient, which made sex normally a battle of strong wills... how hot is that? I love it.
I do love the sex scene here. It’s hot and lovely and I just love it.
It’s weird that I now compare Brem to the Doctor in bed. I honestly don’t mean to, but they are so completely different, it seems. Perhaps it’s because Brem is new to sex while the Doctor is old hat? But the Doctor is usually the lead, the dominant in his sex adventures with Rose, while Brem seems more content to let Kate take the lead. It just makes me wonder about the Doctor’s past and his experiences that led him to be the more “leading man” in bed compared to Brem. To me, I suppose I expected the Doctor with Rose to be more laid-back and let Rose take the lead. Thankfully, you wrote the Doctor as a sex GOD and I thank you for it. LOL. But I would have understood had you written him differently. I suppose I compare Brem’s actual love life to that of the Doctor in “the natural progression of things,” where he is just honestly clueless about what Rose wants and needs - and yet, by the time they finally get around to having sex, he just ups and takes her against a wall and it is HOT. Brem is obviously a quick learner - so I’m very interested in how his second relationship goes... now that he’s got his “first time” out of the way. I wonder if he’ll lead more in bed, and be more like the Doctor.
Are you planning to continue Brem’s story with Amy? Or are you planning to start something new and take the character elsewhere?
I’ve always been curious as to why the Doctor thanks Rose in the end, so gravely. I have a feeling it’s for more than the spectacular sex they’ve just had. Was he thanking her here, for giving him a child? A future with someone? I love the end, and I would love to know your thoughts for writing it like you did.
Re: Chaos Theory Chapter 4
I do love the sex scene here. It’s hot and lovely and I just love it.
It’s weird that I now compare Brem to the Doctor in bed. I honestly don’t mean to, but they are so completely different, it seems. Perhaps it’s because Brem is new to sex while the Doctor is old hat? But the Doctor is usually the lead, the dominant in his sex adventures with Rose, while Brem seems more content to let Kate take the lead. It just makes me wonder about the Doctor’s past and his experiences that led him to be the more “leading man” in bed compared to Brem. To me, I suppose I expected the Doctor with Rose to be more laid-back and let Rose take the lead. Thankfully, you wrote the Doctor as a sex GOD and I thank you for it. LOL. But I would have understood had you written him differently. I suppose I compare Brem’s actual love life to that of the Doctor in “the natural progression of things,” where he is just honestly clueless about what Rose wants and needs - and yet, by the time they finally get around to having sex, he just ups and takes her against a wall and it is HOT. Brem is obviously a quick learner - so I’m very interested in how his second relationship goes... now that he’s got his “first time” out of the way. I wonder if he’ll lead more in bed, and be more like the Doctor.
Are you planning to continue Brem’s story with Amy? Or are you planning to start something new and take the character elsewhere?
I’ve always been curious as to why the Doctor thanks Rose in the end, so gravely. I have a feeling it’s for more than the spectacular sex they’ve just had. Was he thanking her here, for giving him a child? A future with someone? I love the end, and I would love to know your thoughts for writing it like you did.