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Something About Stars (9/20)

Title - Something About Stars (9/20)
Author - [livejournal.com profile] earlgreytea68 
Rating - General 
Characters - Ten, Rose, OCs
Spoilers - Through the specials.   
Disclaimer - I don't own them and I don't make money off of them, but I don't like to dwell on that, so let's move on. (Except for the kids, they're all mine.)
Summary - Four Time Lords and a Bad Wolf human, gallivanting through time and space. What could possibly go wrong?
Author's Notes - I somehow got talked into doing Bikram yoga tomorrow after work. This means that, best case scenario, I get home sometime after 9, and worst case scenario, I die. So, here's an early post for you this week!

Huge thanks to Kristin and [livejournal.com profile] chicklet73 , who talked through plot points. Special thanks to Kristin for coming up with the title. And even more thanks to [livejournal.com profile] jlrpuck  and c73, who so graciously beta'd.

The icon was created by [livejournal.com profile] swankkat , commissioned by [livejournal.com profile] jlrpuck   for my birthday. 

Prologue - Ch 1 - Ch 2 - Ch 3 - Ch 4 - Ch 5 - Ch 6 - Ch 7 

 

Chapter Eight

Athena went to visit Fortuna. Because, when a girl is going to complain about men, the best person to complain to is her sister.

Athena found Fortuna in the middle of baking a cake.

“I thought you might be coming to visit me,” Fortuna informed her. “You’re all muddled up here.” Fortuna pointed to her head.

“I’m not muddled,” retorted Athena. “I’m furious.”

“About what?” asked Fortuna, mildly, sliding her cake into the oven.

“I went to bring Thhhhhhhhhhhmyrian fudge to Matt.”

“Why?”

“Because he loves it.”

“Why were you bringing it to him? Is it his birthday?”

“His birthday?” echoed Athena. “No, it was…He was nice to me, about…It doesn’t matter. I was just trying to be nice, that’s all. I was just trying to be nice.”

“And what happened?” asked Fortuna, and then indicated her kettle. “Tea?”

“What?” Athena looked confused, then nodded. “Yeah, fine.” Athena sat at Fortuna’s kitchen table, warming to her story now. “So I go to his flat, right? And he’s not there. So I put the Thhhhhhhhhhhmyrian fudge in his fridge, and I leave him a note, and I turn around and there is a human girl there.”

“You don’t say,” remarked Fortuna. “A human girl. On Earth. Where humans are the native species. This is quite amazing, Theenie. I mean, it would have been more amazing had you encountered a Sycorax, or a Slitheen, but a human girl is noteworthy.”

Athena frowned at the sarcasm. “The point is that it was a human girl in Matt’s kitchen.”

“Ah,” said Fortuna, and turned as her kettle clicked.

“I don’t think you’re grasping the true importance of this, Fortuna. Her name was Kelly. Kelly!”

“Theenie,” said Fortuna, calmly pouring hot water into the teapot. “I definitely grasp the true importance of this. Much better than you do.”

“What does that mean?” demanded Athena. “You sound like the bloody Oracle at Delphi.”

Fortuna put the pot on the table between them. “I make much more sense than the Oracle at Delphi. Tell me about the human girl.”

Kelly.”

“Yes, Kelly.” Fortuna sat opposite Athena, looking politely interested.

Athena frowned again. There was something unnerving about Fortuna. Something smug, she thought. She narrowed her eyes and said, “Well, I took back his Thhhhhhhhhhhmyrian fudge.”

“Took it back?”

“Out of his fridge and onto my TARDIS. It was very satisfying.”

“And what did Kelly say?”

“Not much of anything. She just stared. Matt was saying enough, anyhow.”

“Matt was there?”

“Oh. Yes. He showed up and…He showed up.”

“And what?”

“What?”

“He showed up and what?”

“We quarreled,” said Athena.

“About what?”

“I don’t even know.”

Fortuna looked at her, brown eyes steady. “You do know, Theenie.” Fortuna leaned forward and poured out their tea.

“There you go being cryptic, again. Honestly, it is very Oracle at Delphi, Fort.”

Fortuna nudged Athena’s teacup over to her and then said, “You’re in love with Matt, Athena.”

Athena stared at her in shocked silence. “What? No, I’m not.”

“Yes, you are,” said Fortuna, and sipped her tea.

Athena was speechless. She took her hair down, shook it out, put it back up, tied her pink ribbon, and then said, “This is outrageous.”

“Uh-huh,” said Fortuna.

“I’m not in love with him, Fortuna. I love him, of course I love him, he’s Matt, you love him, too, but I’m not…it’s not…”

“You have one of his sweatshirts.”

“What?”

“We all went to watch the fireworks on New France, for Bastille Day. Matt had a sweatshirt on, because he and Brem had been somewhere cold just before that. Matt thought he lost it, he was looking for it later. You kept it.” Fortuna sipped her tea again.

Athena looked shocked. “How did you know that?”

Fortuna smiled. “Actually, I didn’t, until just now.”

Athena squeaked. “I only kept it because…because…well, I was going to wash it for him, eventually—”

“You kept it because it reminds you of him, so that you have something of his when you miss him. You’re absurdly in love with him, Theenie. And you should tell him, because he loves you back. He’s always loved you back.”

Athena untied and retied her ponytail again. “There was a human girl named Kelly, Fort—”

“What did Matt say to you? When you quarreled?”

“I don’t know, he said…He said…I don’t know, that I didn’t have any right to be upset with him, and…I don’t know, something about decades and centuries.”

“Decades and centuries,” repeated Fortuna.

“Yes, how he didn’t have centuries, he had decades. It didn’t make sense, Fort.”

“Oh, Theenie.” Fortuna’s smile was affectionate. “He’s not wrong. He doesn’t have centuries, he has decades. How long can you expect him to wait? At the end of it all, he’s going to be a blink of an eye to you, Theenie. You have to go tell him you love him now, you’ll regret every moment you wasted not telling him.”

Athena stared at Fortuna, trying to process what she was saying. The possibility existed that she was in love with Matt Mailloux. The possibility existed that every relationship she’d ever had had failed because she had long ago given her hearts to someone else. The possibility existed that she had been spoken for, for years, and had foolishly never realized it. "Oh," she said, breathlessly. "I'm in love with Matt."

"Yes," agreed Fortuna, kindly, sipping her tea.

"How did I not...?"

"You're thick about these things. You get it from Dad. It's okay."

How could Fortuna so calmly be sipping her tea? "What am I going to do?" she demanded.

"You should tell him, Theenie. It will make him very, very happy. And I think he will make you very, very happy."

Suddenly, Athena could see the fork in the golden thread of her timeline. She could see it barreling upon her. How could she not have seen this before? She was going to have to make a choice, if she didn’t make it now the opportunity might be lost to her forever. “What if he…”

“He watches every move you make, Athena, for the slightest signal from you, the tiniest indication. Go to him. You won’t even have to say it. He’ll know. Now. The only decision to make is whether you should go before or after you finish your tea.”

***

They followed the Ood through a cave scattered over with candles, with a fire around which a number of Ood sat.

“Doctor,” said one of the Ood. “We’ve been waiting for you.”

“Yes, that’s what you keep telling me,” replied the Doctor, in clipped tones. “Anyone want to tell me why?”

“We do not know,” said another Ood.

“The mind of the Ood is troubled,” said yet another.

The Doctor looked quizzically among the Ood. “Why? What’s happened?”

“Every night, Doctor, we have bad dreams.”

“About what?”

There was an Ood muttering in the corner, rocking over a pot, waving its fumes toward him.

The Doctor felt Rose inch closer, her hand curled over his in his pocket.

“What’s wrong with him?” she asked, nervously.

“He’s Seeing,” the Doctor answered, and stepped forward, trying to determine the individual words the Ood was saying.

“Returning, returning, returning, it is slowly returning, through the dark and the fire and the blood, always returning, returning to this world. It is returning. And he is returning. And they are returning. But too late. Too Late. Far too late. He has come.”

The Doctor turned to one of the other Ood. “What’s that mean? It doesn’t make sense to me. What’s returning?”

“Events are taking shape. So many years ago and yet changing the now,” answered the Ood the Doctor had asked.

“Riddles,” said the Doctor. “These are riddles. Time is always in flux, the now is always changing, what are you talking about?”

“We see so much, but understand little,” replied the Ood.

“You and me both,” muttered the Doctor.

“A shadow is falling over creation,” said another Ood. “Something vast is stirring in the dark.”

“The Ood have gained this power to see through time,” contributed another. “Because time is bleeding. Shapes of things once lost are moving through the veil. And these events from years ago threaten to destroy this future. And the present. And the past.”

The Doctor stared around at them. He thought. And then he said, “Well. Thanks, then. Is that the only message you’ve got for me?”

“Only this,” said an Ood who hadn’t spoken before. “Songs are ending, Doctor.”

The Doctor went still. “What songs? What do you mean?”

“Songs, Doctor. Your song. The songs around you. Ending.”

Rose shivered against him.

The Doctor looked at her and said, “We’re going.”

He turned and led them out of the cave, past the carpets of candles. He could hear the Seeing Ood, behind them, muttering, over and over, Ending, ending, ending

Next Chapter



 


[identity profile] catyuy.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
OH DEAR!!!!
Yippee for Athena finally getting it but now I fear that we might get Time Lords, The Master and Daleks OH MY!!
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[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
Time Lords, the Master, and Daleks > lions, tigers, and bears

[identity profile] auntiesuze.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
I LOVE FORTUNA!!!! *giggle* That entire scene with Athena is AWESOME. It's like, girl, do I have to conk you over the head to make you understand that you're in love with this guy? LOLOLOLOL

"You're thick about these things. You get it from Dad. It's okay."

Hahahahahahaha. That is SO true.

The Ood are kinda freakin' me out, though. The Daleks? The Master? Something even more horrible?? Yikes.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
I love Fortuna, too! She has such a lovely streak of practicality that the others lack sometimes. Because of their father's Time Lord genes. ;-)

[identity profile] frakup.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!! What's happening?! Okay, deep breath. Now, hooray for Fort finally spelling it out for Athena. She was finally ready to hear it, I guess. Now I hope that Athena can get through the conversation with Matt and they get their happily ever after. Knowing you, though, Athena's going to get caught up in this time skip nonsense before she can talk to him and it will be agony for all of us.

As for the Ood thing, you're killing me here. Excellent build up of suspense. I'm dying to know what's happening. Please don't regenerate any of them.

Can't wait to see how you tie in the EoT/Time Lords/Master foofaraw in.

Thanks for posting early even though it means we've got to wait eight days for the next chapter.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:46 am (UTC)(link)
"She was finally ready to hear it, I guess."

I think Athena was willfully ignorant of Matt's role in her life, and I think Fortuna thought it had gone on long enough. She's worried about Athena and the time skips, and she decided to give Athena one last thing to worry about by clueing her in to how she feels about Matt.

I'm glad you're all in suspense! You're supposed to be!

And it'll be an early post next week, too, I have Wednesday and Thursday night obligations again.

[identity profile] tzikeh.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
I do love how it's clear, in the scene between them, that Fort takes after Rose, and Athena takes after the Doctor.

But - and I'm so excited - here it comes -

THE MYTHARC OF RASSILON

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
It's very true, Fort has so much of her mother in her, which Athena needs so desperately at that moment.

"THE MYTHARC OF RASSILON"

I AM DYING LAUGHING.

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Heh. Rest assured, jlrpuck and chicklet73 both have the full manuscript. Should anything happen to me, they can definitely finish posting. ;-)

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[identity profile] np-complete.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh! A Chaosverse update on the same day as the last chapter of the_tenzo's story! It's almost like my birthday! (and makes up for my new PC deciding it's going to lock solid about every 30 minutes today.)

I have this terrible fear that Matt may not survive this story. I hope that that's not true. But I'm very afraid that something terrible will happen to him.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:50 am (UTC)(link)
Happy Almost Like Your Birthday! ;-) (But sorry about your PC.)

And, as for Matt, well, no hints!

[identity profile] dudewithak.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:10 am (UTC)(link)
Thank goodness for Fortuna! That should kick Athena into gear. Dear Matt, he doesn't know what he's in for.

As for the Ood. creepy.

Excellent chapter! Please update soon!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:51 am (UTC)(link)
This is the reason Athena needs a sister. ;-)

Glad you enjoyed!

[identity profile] beatlejessie.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
HEEEEE Fortuna to the rescue!!

"You're thick about these things. You get it from Dad. It's okay." *dies* Yes, that's just about it, isn't it Fort?

Just like in the series, the Ood are starting to freak me out here. Can't wait till next week!!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:51 am (UTC)(link)
Fortuna and her penchant for truth-telling. ;-)
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[personal profile] glory_jean 2010-04-21 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Oh is that where we are? Yikes.

Glad to see Fortuna knocking some sense into Athena.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
Yes. That's where we are. ;-)

And some sense-knocking for Athena was long overdue.

[identity profile] orelle-peredhil.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
Oh dear, oh dear. Love that Athena's finally got her head on straight re: our beloved Matt - hooray Fortuna! - but the Ood and the songs ending are making me terribly nervous. Meep!

Bikram yoga, ew. I (literally) can't stand the heat. Ugh. Have fun and try not to melt!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, Fortuna deserves much praise, doesn't she? ;-)

I've never tried this Bikram yoga before. I've done regular yoga, and I love it, and I don't normally mind heat (I am like a reptile, I am constantly cold unless I am soaking in the sun), but I'm nervous!

[identity profile] beingfacetious.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
NERVOUS ABOUT ALL OF THIS.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
I know, I'm sorry! I'm just so cruel!

[identity profile] glorious-clio.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 02:57 am (UTC)(link)
Matt and Athena, sitting in a tree... K-I-S-S-I-N-G, etc. So cute that she kept a sweatshirt. <3

Also, no songs had better be ending, except a dalek or other enemy!!! I won't hate you forever, just for a really long while. :P

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
You know you're very far gone when you're stealing a guy's clothing. Ah, those clueless Gallifreyan genes Athena inherited. ;-)

Well, I am relieved to know it wouldn't be *forever.* ;-)

[identity profile] kholly.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 03:14 am (UTC)(link)
I know the kids are adults in this, but *sniff* when did Fort grow up?

"You're thick about these things. You get it from Dad. It's okay."
Love this.

Creepy ood with bad dreams, the plot just keeps getting thicker and thicker.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
I know, it is kind of sad, isn't it, how pulled together and wise these tiny kids have turned out to be? Imagine how Ten and Rose feel! Time just flew for them!

[identity profile] fishface44.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
Wildly true in any universe: "Because, when a girl is going to complain about men, the best person to complain to is her sister."

I loved the entire conversation with Fortuna. Run, Theenie, run!!!

And you are seriously scaring me with all this Ood warning stuff! I hope you are remembering that the Chaos Verse is supposed to be one of the happiest places anywhere!!!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:40 am (UTC)(link)
That's what sisters are for, isn't it? ;-)

And the Chaos Verse *is* a happy place! Look at all the happy stories!

[identity profile] susanb03.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
oh oh oh!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
I know! ;-)

[identity profile] lorelaisquared.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE* Thank you for giving us Fortuna and for making her beat Athena over the head with the not so shocking (to everyone not Athena) news that she's in love with Matt! I love the way you handled that and how Fortuna calmly and patiently listened to her sister before basically just blurting it out. I also loved that she used the sweatshirt for evidence! So perfect. Now I can't wait for her to tell Matt. *squeeeeeeeee*

Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear. Ood EOT prophesy words means only bad, bad, bad things. I'm very curious to see how this will tie in with Athena's time skips, the Daleks from the beginning and whatever bits of EOT that you end up using. Ooooh, this is going to be epic.

“Songs, Doctor. Your song. The songs around you. Ending.”

EEEEEEEP. I have a very, very bad feeling about this....
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[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
Fortuna is such a gift, to all of them, and they totally view her that way, too, every member of the family. She's just so sweetly and unerringly devoted to the truth.

As for the Ood, well, not hints. ;-)

Love your icon!

[identity profile] morningroses.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 05:22 am (UTC)(link)
I worry about how the Master in the Chaosverse may play out...someone's song is going to end...I'm very worried.

However on a better note yay Fort for making Theenie stop being so thick!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
Fort gets three cheers! ;-)

As for the rest: No hints!

[identity profile] ladymcclellan.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 05:38 am (UTC)(link)
Woah! WTF?! No,no,no,no,no! No songs ending, no regenerations, no Rose and eleven. If you wanted to make Matt the boy bad wolf I'm alright with that, but no songs ending. Be silent, creepy Ood.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:50 am (UTC)(link)
I will give you no hints! That is all I shall say. ;-)

[identity profile] sapphire-child.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
Ah! Ah! Ah! Omg!

Thank GOD Fortuna got her mothers sensibilities and can tell Theenie how silly she's being over Matt. Hurrah!

That said...their songs are ending? ALL of them?! Holy crap man, you have seriously got me worried now D:

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
The family is so lucky to have Rose's genes running through it. ;-)

Can I steal your icon?

[identity profile] feerocious.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
Please don't end the song of anyone I like! lol

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
Heh. You'd better give me a list of the off-limits. ;-)

[identity profile] feebeeglee.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 06:02 am (UTC)(link)
Matt! Theenie! Yay!

STFU OOD!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
Hahahaha. For some reason, "STFU OOD!" cracks me up.

[identity profile] kellywiag.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 09:49 am (UTC)(link)
OHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

I am sitting trembling with fear of the future of our fabulous Chaos family!!
I love Fort with her wonderful wisdom; wonderful wisdom, huh, sometimes a girl jusr needs her sister. Im so glad Theenie realises her feelings for Matt although I can just imagine the hijiks involved trying to get to Matt to tell him how she feels. Time skip anyone?

I really love the Ood and how they have turned up here but the sense of forboding is tooooo much to soon for me, I may have to read next week from behind the sofa hiding behind my eyes, yes Im that scared for them.....

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
It's true, sometimes a girl does just need her sister. ;-)

Please let me know if you read from behind the sofa! That would amuse me!

[identity profile] glass-moment.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 10:12 am (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOD. Okay, Fortuna was awesome, yay for Athena/Matt, etc., but...WHAT?? I had absolutely no idea this was where you were going with this fic. Wait, I don't even know where you're going with it! Things! That sound like the End of Time! Death! Drama! Ood! Songs ending! You keep saying you aren't planning to write regenerations in this 'verse...I kind of hope that's a filthy lie meant to throw us off? :-P

*settles in to wait for next chapter*

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-22 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
Haha! I love that I entirely shocked you! Yes! Go, me! ;-)

[identity profile] rosewarren.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 11:39 am (UTC)(link)
"You're thick about these things. You get it from Dad. It's okay."

AHAHAHAHAHAHA!

I love Fortuna making Athena realize what's going on, and I'm desperate to see the scene where Athena and Matt figure things out. The EoT prophecy might have freaked me out, what with the potential prospect of the Master coming back, but I know the Doctor's song won't be ending because in 100 years he'll be finding pink glitter in the TARDIS. Unless you are messing with the timelines of your own stories, and I refuse to believe that.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-24 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
You know, I have to admit that I didn't even think of the fact that Ten is finding the glitter in a few centuries. There is no regeneration, I assure you, but I never really thought of the fact that I *can't* regenerate him. Thanks for reminding me!

[identity profile] jellybean728.livejournal.com 2010-04-21 01:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank god for Fortuna. It's about time someone talked some plain sense into her.

The possibility existed that she had been spoken for, for years, and had foolishly never realized it. "Oh," she said, breathlessly. "I'm in love with Matt."

"Yes," agreed Fortuna, kindly, sipping her tea.

"How did I not...?"

"You're thick about these things. You get it from Dad. It's okay."


I love how the kids are so much a reflection of their parents. Honestly, that could have been Rose & the Doctor talking right there. Except for the names & pronouns.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-04-24 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
Ha! You're right, it could have been Rose and the Doctor. Which is precisely why Athena needs Fortuna so much! ;-)

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