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Something About Stars (14/20)

Title - Something About Stars (14/20)
Author - [livejournal.com profile] earlgreytea68 
Rating - General 
Characters - Ten, Rose, Master, OCs
Spoilers - Through the specials.   
Disclaimer - I don't own them and I don't make money off of them, but I don't like to dwell on that, so let's move on. (Except for the kids, they're all mine.)
Summary - Four Time Lords and a Bad Wolf human, gallivanting through time and space. What could possibly go wrong?
Author's Notes -  Huge thanks to Kristin and [livejournal.com profile] chicklet73 , who talked through plot points. Special thanks to Kristin for coming up with the title. And even more thanks to [livejournal.com profile] jlrpuck  and c73, who so graciously beta'd.

The icon was created by [livejournal.com profile] swankkat , commissioned by [livejournal.com profile] jlrpuck   for my birthday. 

Prologue - Ch 1 - Ch 2 - Ch 3 - Ch 4 - Ch 5 - Ch 6 - Ch 7 - Ch 8 - Ch 9 - Ch 10 - Ch 11 - Ch 12

 

Chapter Thirteen

Their father never talked about the Time War. That had been a constant throughout their lives. He did not want to talk about it now, either, and they didn’t push him on it. It was enough to know what he had told them. The details of whatever else had happened between him and the Time Lords that now made him think they would use his kids to get back at him were not important. What was important was that, as much as the Doctor thought he had to protect his kids, his kids were of the opinion that they had to protect their father. Rose watched her family mobilize itself into determined warriors and wondered if they had been heading for moments like this all along. As much as she had tried to keep them out of the fray, her children were fighters, and frighteningly good ones, she thought.

Brem was out of bed and dressed. He and Matt had had a row over it, which had effectively ended when the Doctor had admitted that Time Lords healed more quickly than humans, especially with the benefit of good, strong, hot tea.

So Brem was up and dressed and pulling on his freshly cleaned and repaired coat when the TARDIS landed on Cunodys.

The Doctor was studying the read-out on the monitor. “What time period did you say this was?” he asked.

“It’s late 32nd century,” answered Athena.

“It’s too advanced,” murmured the Doctor. “It’s far too advanced for them. Something’s been mucking with the timelines here. Should have realized that.”

“It’s not supposed to look like that?” Athena looked out at the snowy spires, so familiar from her visits during her relationship with Lim.

“No. It’s not. They’re Ood, they don’t—”

“Lim wasn’t an Ood, you know,” Athena said.

Her father looked at her in surprise. “Really? What was he?”

“He was a Cunodysian. We’re on Cunodys, that’s what lives on Cunodys.”

“No, Ood live on Cunodys,” corrected the Doctor, confused.

“Well, it’s a big planet,” noted Rose. “Maybe they both live on Cunodys.”

“It’s an almost completely uninhabitable planet,” said the Doctor. “There’s this city, that’s it. Am I right?”

Athena nodded.

“Well, I don’t know what to make of that,” remarked the Doctor. “There were Ood on this planet when your mother and I were last here.”

“When was that?” Athena asked.

“Long before the late 32nd century,” admitted the Doctor.

“Well, anything could have happened in between then,” Athena pointed out.

“Maybe,” allowed the Doctor, and kept looking at the monitor.

“What’s the plan?” asked Fortuna.

“We’re four Time Lords, in a TARDIS, with a white-point star. Last time Brem was here, didn’t seem to take them long to find him with a few sonic blasters, I’m guessing it will take them even less time to find us now.”

“And what will we do when they find us?”

“Chat about the weather,” said the Doctor, and moved then, because it flickered in his head, the consciousness of another Time Lord, and it was time to go. He grabbed his coat from the coral strut.

“Dad,” his kids said in unison, as they felt it, too.

“Stay here,” he told all of them, stepping out into the snow of Cunodys, and they ignored him and stepped outside beside him, ringed around next to him, and as much as he wished they would have obeyed him, he had to admit it was nice to have a small entourage of his own to face the small army of vehicles moving out to meet them. “Look at that,” he said. “Such a large welcoming committee.”

“I don’t understand,” said Athena. “Nothing like this ever happened when I visited Cunodys.”

“No. Because I think what happened when you visited Cunodys was that you called this all into being.”

Athena didn’t have time to ask him what he meant by that, because the cars pulled to a halt, and soldiers piled out, ringing around them with steadily pointing guns, although the Doctor ignored all of them except for the platinum-haired man wearing a black hoodie who leaped lightly to the ground, sent him a ferocious grin, and said, “Isn’t it good to see each other after all these years, Doctor?”

“Welllllllll,” replied the Doctor. “Depends on your definition of ‘good.’”

“You never can just answer a question, can you?” His eyes roamed over the rest of the contingent. “Oh, look at all of you. This is just delightful! It’s a little Doctor,” he exclaimed, in delight, pausing before Brem. “It’s adorable! You’re like a set of salt and pepper shakers. A tall set. I think you’d be pepper.” He pointed to Brem.

Brem put his hands in his pockets.

He looked back at the Doctor. “Aren’t you going to introduce me? Where are your manners? Tut, tut, tut,” he said, shaking his head.

“This is the Master,” said the Doctor.

“Hello.” The Master waved at them, then looked at the Doctor. “Aren’t you going to tell me their names?”

The Doctor tipped one edge of his mouth up in a mockery of a smile.

“Oh, be that way,” sighed the Master, and addressed the children. “Your father and I were mates as boys. Then your father kept trying to kill me, it was all very tiresome.” He turned to Matt. “Human,” he pronounced. “Boring.” Then he turned to Rose. “You, on the other hand…What are you?”

Rose smiled icily.

The Master looked at the Doctor in alarm. “She’s…she’s wrong.”

“I bet it hurts you to look at her, doesn’t it?” inquired the Doctor, smugly.

The Master frowned, displeased. “Well,” he said, loudly, “lovely as it’s been catching up with all of you, there’s only one of you I need.”

The Doctor said nothing.

The Master moved closer to him, studying him closely. “You don’t know, do you?”

The Doctor said nothing again.

“It’s the double-beat of a Time Lord’s hearts,” said the Master, looking now at Athena.

“What is?” she said, before she could stop herself.

“The drumming in your head.”

“What drumming?”

The Master snorted. “What sort of children are you raising? She doesn’t even know how to properly process a psychic link?”

Something occurred to the Doctor that should have occurred to him much earlier. “Athena,” he said, slowly, “come here for a second.”

The Master stepped back, to give Athena room to shift closer to her father, who lifted his hands up and placed an index finger on either side of Athena’s head. His head filled with a staccato drumbeat of four, and he dropped his hands immediately.

“What is it?” asked Athena, reacting to the look of alarm on his face.

He turned swiftly to the Master. “What is it? What have you done to her?”

The Master looked bored. “I haven’t done anything to her.”

“Whatever it is, I want it reversed, now, all of it.”

“And I want a pony,” exclaimed the Master. “Life is tough. She’s coming with me.”

“Oh, I really don’t think so,” said the Doctor.

“Aw, see, that was disappointing. I thought you were going to say ‘over my dead body,’ and then I was going to say, ‘that can be arranged,’ and it was going to be really witty and clever and I’ve missed our little talks, haven’t you?” The Master’s voice turned hard. “She’s coming with me.”

“No, she’s really not.”

“She’s coming with me, or the human dies.” The Master lifted his hand up.

Out of the corner of his eye, the Doctor saw every gun swing to aim at Matt.

And he saw Athena step forward. “I’ll go,” she said.

“Athena,” said Matt. “Don’t.”

“You’re not going anywhere,” said the Doctor, not taking his eyes from the Master, who smiled at him.

“I’m going,” she said, and he watched her stomp over to the car the Master had exited. “Is this our transport?”

“For now,” said the Master, still looking at the Doctor, “yes. Where’s the white-point star, Doctor?”

“What white-point star?”

“The one the little Doctor stole from me.”

“Have you ever seen a white-point star, Brem?” asked the Doctor.

“I don’t even know what one is,” answered Brem.

“How could he have a white-point star?” the Doctor asked the Master. “They don’t exist anymore.”

The Master stared at him for a very long time. “Where is it?” he demanded, again.

The Doctor winked.

“We’ll find it. Wherever you’ve hidden it, we’ll find it.”

“It’s triangulating the signal, isn’t it? You need Athena, and you need the white-point star.”

“Tell me where it is.”

“If I had it, don’t you think I’d have destroyed it by now, and we wouldn’t even be having this conversation?”

The Master narrowed his eyes. Then he spat out, “I think I will let the human live, it’s nice to have something to threaten to kill when I need something from you. And, as for the rest of you, I really don’t feel like sitting here and waiting for you to run out of regenerations. And, anyway, something tells me you might like to see what happens next, Doctor.”

It was Fortuna who asked the obvious question. “What happens next?”

“Some of your dad’s old mates are going to drop in,” said the Master. “Great, big, family reunion. Cheers, everyone!” He waved happily and practically skipped to the vehicle.

The Doctor watched the soldiers run back to their own vehicles.

“What are you doing?” demanded Matt. “Aren’t you going to stop them?”

“What am I going to do?” he asked. “He won’t hurt her, he needs her, she’s keeping the link alive, and the Time Lords need the link.”

“For what?”

The planet started rumbling. The Doctor did not seem surprised at all. “For that,” he said, watching the vehicles as they drove away. Then he turned his head, watching as the planet broke through the sky, enormous and orange and burning in places, not the Gallifrey he chose to remember but Gallifrey as it had been, at the very end of it all.

“What is it?” asked Fortuna.

And he answered, grimly, “Home.”

Next Chapter



 


[identity profile] glorious-clio.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
EEP!!!!
Also, you haven't necessarily described the Master, but I'm totally picture John Simm in my head.

This was brilliant: “Aw, see, that was disappointing. I thought you were going to say ‘over my dead body,’ and then I was going to say, ‘that can be arranged,’ and it was going to be really witty and clever and I’ve missed our little talks, haven’t you?” The Master’s voice turned hard. “She’s coming with me.”

Also, I love that Rose is "wrong" to the Master, but to the Doctor and the kids, they're used to her, just like Uncle Jack.

IS IT WEDNESDAY YET?!!!

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[identity profile] frakup.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 12:43 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, excellent plotty chapter. Loved the way you wrote the Master.

Is it sad that every Wednesday as soon as you surface I just wait not so patiently for the chapter to show up? It's on of the highlights of my week.
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[personal profile] glory_jean 2010-05-27 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
Oh! That's right it's Wednesday. Yay!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-01 03:07 am (UTC)(link)
It was indeed Wednesday! ;-)

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[identity profile] fishface44.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
A shivery great chapter!!!!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!
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[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:08 am (UTC)(link)
I'm going to start passing out drinks, I think.

[identity profile] katydidto.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
I want a pony! LOL
You need to fix your chapter count, 20 is not going to be nearly enough.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:09 am (UTC)(link)
Heh. I actually can't believe we're so close to the end now!

(And that's my favorite line, too!)

[identity profile] np-complete.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, goodness, goodness, goodness, goodness, goodness!

To think we have to wait another week to find out what happens next!

That complaint aside, I had some really bad news today, and am pretty demoralized. So it was good to have a treat like a new chapter waiting for me -- I had forgotten it was Wednesday!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
I know, I keep you in such terrible suspense! ;-)

I am sorry to hear about your bad news, but I am glad I was able to have some small part in picking you up. ::hugs::

[identity profile] outforawalk.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
Eep!

Is it next week yet?

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:18 am (UTC)(link)
Almost!

[identity profile] lorelaisquared.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
ACK! How can you stop there? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!

THE MASTER!!! (written wonderfully BTW)

Drums in Athena's head!

Athena voluntarily kidnapped!

GALLIFREY! EEP EEP EEP EEP EEP!!!!!

I was going to say more but you've got me in a tizzy with that ending. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!

(and BRILLIANT!)

[identity profile] see-a-panther.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
Squee! Chaos!Master! I was so hoping he would turn up for weeks now, but the closer you got to the end, the more I was starting to think he wouldn't. The line about the pony is genius. I'm actually really looking forward to (hopefully...?) a Master/Athena exchange to come, as I think she's absolutely got what it takes to stand up to him. Now I have to hope that you don't kill him off by the end - there's nothing I love more than some snark dressed as a platinum blond.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, I was trying to throw off suspicion, holding him off as long as possible. ;-) And I'm glad you liked the pony line! It's my favorite, too!

[identity profile] morningroses.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
Ahhh! It's the Master! I love how he refers to Brem as little Doctor, made me laugh. And this line is classic Master:“Aw, see, that was disappointing. I thought you were going to say ‘over my dead body,’ and then I was going to say, ‘that can be arranged,’ and it was going to be really witty and clever and I’ve missed our little talks, haven’t you?”
Now if you'll excuse me I must hop in the TARDIS I bought off ebay and skip over to next Wednesday.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
He has a way of hitting on what will bother each person the most, and he's totally got Brem pegged there. Brem turns out to just be a much cooler customer than the Master would have anticipated!

I had great fun writing the Master, I'm glad you enjoyed him!

[identity profile] susanb03.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 04:10 am (UTC)(link)
Ooooooh Boy! :)

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Yup! ;-)

[identity profile] dudewithak.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
SHUT THE DOOR!

What an update!

I did have a *snort* moment. Had a few of them, actually. But this one was great:

"You’re like a set of salt and pepper shakers. A tall set. I think you’d be pepper.” He pointed to Brem.

*snort*

Keep up the good work!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Hahahahaha! The Master is so insane, he's a blast to write!

[identity profile] aceofannwn.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
“Oh, be that way,” sighed the Master, and addressed the children. “Your father and I were mates as boys. Then your father kept trying to kill me, it was all very tiresome.”

*raises eyebrow* Right.

I love your description, by the way - the platinum-haired man wearing a black hoodie who leaped lightly to the ground, sent him a ferocious grin - that is just him to a tee, especially the bit about a ferocious grin.

And I love his delight over it's a little Doctor! It's adorable! You're like a set of salt and pepper shakers!
and his excitement over Time Lords turning up again, just because of all the chaos that'll ensue.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
lol - The Master is a big fan of revisionist history!

And I'm glad you enjoyed the way I wrote him! I had a lot of fun with him!

[identity profile] feerocious.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 07:14 am (UTC)(link)
What a fantastic chapter!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!

[identity profile] azriona.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 11:14 am (UTC)(link)
Interesting. Question, though (because I'm contrary like that): how is the Master returned when the Doctor didn't go to Malcarisso with Martha and Jack to remind Doctor Yana that he was the Master? And if he didn't go to Malcarisso, how is the Doctor not surprised to see him, since last the Doctor knew, the Master was locked away on Gallifrey like all the rest of the Time Lords?

(I'm sure there's an answer, and I'm missing some bit of information or something, and I just don't remember.)

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
It's vaguely alluded to in a future chapter, but I made the assumption that the Master would eventually have opened his pocket watch even without the Doctor being involved. I have no basis for this, other than that it just seems to make sense to me that *eventually,* given a long enough period of time, he would open the pocket watch.

As for why the Doctor wasn't surprised to see him, it was mostly because of the white-point star being around. The Doctor had pretty much suspected that he was about to meet up with another Time Lord, because Gallifrey was escaping from the time lock somehow, and the Master was the most predictable one to show up to bother him.

[identity profile] rosewarren.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 11:37 am (UTC)(link)
Whoa. Was Not Expecting That. It was very nice to see the Master, and I must admit that [livejournal.com profile] azriona raises a good point about him, only I really don't care HOW because I love him too much here. The little Doctor, matching salt and pepper shakers, knowing Rose is wrong and not liking it.

And now I'm sad that I have to wait another week, but at least my husband my son to school so I got to read at my leisure. :)

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
I answered azriona's questions. Whether satisfactorily or not, who knows? ;-)

I'm glad no one was late for school this morning!

[identity profile] beatlejessie.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 11:50 am (UTC)(link)
GAHHHH! Mean, mean, mean, making us all wait another week for these updates!!

However, since we do have this piece now- the Master is perfect (ferocious grin and all) and I love that Athena is the one with the drums in her head. I also love that she is perfectly willing to go along once Matt is threatened- gawwww. Plus, I know she can hold her own with the Master- can't wait to see that!!!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
I *am* mean, it's true. ;-)

Athena will do anything to protect Matt. That's simply A Fact now. It actually would have been A Fact before she realized she was in love with him, too.

[identity profile] hence-the-name.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. I love how you're reimagining this storyline...awesome stuff, as usual!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It was very fun to twist the plot to my purposes! ;-)

[identity profile] qtrhorserider.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 03:53 pm (UTC)(link)
There you go hanging cliffs again. Your Master is brilliant. He just picked a fight with the wrong little family unit though. If he thinks Rose is "wrong" now, just wait til she warms up. He's got her baby. I think I'd be more afraid of the Oncoming Mum than the Oncoming Dad.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
I have to admit, this fic is full of cliffhangers. ;-)

And oh, yes, never cross the Tylers. Ever.

[identity profile] kellywiag.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 04:07 pm (UTC)(link)
The Master! I bloody well love you! Ha Simm!Master yipeeeee!!!!

I am all kinds of scared about whats going to happen and how we, well you, well they get there. Yes you have me hooked again, hooked I tell you!!
Can I wish a week away and have the next chapter now please? Pretty please? Pretty please with all lovely stuff and a huge non ending cup of char for the author?

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I love you, too! And I'm glad I have you hooked! If I could transport us through time, I would totally do it, I swear!

[identity profile] orelle-peredhil.livejournal.com 2010-05-28 03:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, Athena, no! *wibbles* Though I bet she'll give the Master a run for his money.

How is all of this going to get wrapped up in six more chapters???

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Don't worry, the chapters are going to be bigger on the inside. ;-)

[identity profile] maniacalshen.livejournal.com 2010-05-29 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
Yikes! Can't wait to see what happens next. And what Athena thinks of the Master.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
You don't have long to wait now!
redcirce: bouncy Rose (manic Rose)

[personal profile] redcirce 2010-05-30 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
The Master!!! I squeed so hard when he showed up my roommate had to ask me what was wrong. I am excited for Master/Athena snarkage. And the six of them against a whole planet of time lords! The plot of this just keeps getting more twisty and awesome.

Things I really liked from this (and the last few chapters, since I've been a bad commenter) Brem still being terrifying and a miracle (Aww.), Brem calling the Doctor on his "Gallifrey angst", that the kids all find the white point star terrible, the backstory about the Doctor approving Brem's coat (again with the aww), the brief Athena/Matt moment in his apartment, that everyone ignores the Doctor's "stay here" without a pause (Has any of them, ever, listened to the Doctor when he told them to stay put?), the Master finding Rose "wrong" (it'd be interesting to see them interact as well), and the Master, well, being the Master (“And I want a pony,”) Fabulous all round.

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-03 02:21 am (UTC)(link)
Heh. Writing the Master was so incredibly fun! I'm so glad you were excited to see him!

I loved the "Gallifrey angst" idea, I had to have Brem call his father on it. I also loved getting to tell everyone the story of Brem's coat.

And no, none of them have ever listened to the Doctor when he said to stay put. ;-)

As for Matt/Athena, they have the best moments ever, don't they?

[identity profile] lostmoon71.livejournal.com 2010-06-02 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
Ack! Gallifrey bursting through is so NOT good news. *bites nails*

But the salt-and-pepper-shaker bit? Hilarious. And your Master sounds so in character to my ear. And Theenie has the four-beat drumming? Yikes. And I love how Rose fixes the Master with her icy stare and panics him, even slightly.

But here's my favorite part:
“Stay here,” he told all of them, stepping out into the snow of Cunodys, and they ignored him and stepped outside beside him, ringed around next to him, and as much as he wished they would have obeyed him, he had to admit it was nice to have a small entourage of his own to face the small army of vehicles moving out to meet them.

Yay for Team Ten!

[identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com 2010-06-05 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
I loved writing the Master, he was super-fun. And I also loved writing him being intimidated by Bad Wolf Rose. Because you know Rose would not stand for any of the crazy stuff that went down in LotTL, no way.

I also loved getting to write Team Ten. He needs a team!

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