"Chaos Theory" Chapter 23 Commentary

So NaNo is halfway done! I am on target with words, which is a very good thing. It's been a very interesting experience so far and I'm sure I will have a detailed post with all of my thoughts on it when it's all over. In the meantime, lorelaisquared requested a commentary on Chapter 23 of original "Chaos Theory."

( Commentary! )

Prisoner of Azkaban: Chapters Ten through Thirteen

( From The Marauder's Map to Gryffindor Versus Ravenclaw )