I think you're totally justified in loving that seduction scene. Because it's freaking awesome. And hot as heck. Every time I read it, it makes me go "guhhh." And then of course it all goes to hell in a handbasket, but hey! It gets better.
I also think it's funny that you "justified" so much of this fic in the set up, because I totally missed it, ha. Reading it I'm just like "yeah, yeah of course he'd go hunt her down, of course he'd be in the flat..." So I guess the explanations fit so smoothly into the narrative that they seem entirely obvious. :P
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Date: 2010-09-15 05:09 am (UTC)I also think it's funny that you "justified" so much of this fic in the set up, because I totally missed it, ha. Reading it I'm just like "yeah, yeah of course he'd go hunt her down, of course he'd be in the flat..." So I guess the explanations fit so smoothly into the narrative that they seem entirely obvious. :P
I hope we'll get part II at some point!