My favorite bits of this fic: I love that the Doctor knows what she’s talking about by the wave of her hand. I love that Rose blushes when the Doctor gives her a predatory look. The fact that he expresses so clearly his sexual thoughts is fantastic and I love that it’s still early enough in their experience that she still blushes about the fact that he’s thinking less than pure thoughts about her. I always gathered from this fic that it was she who had been keeping count of their shags, and he only counted after realizing that she was off. Because he pauses after she drawls “eight” - like he’s double checking in his mind. But I very much like the idea that they both are keeping count. It’s very sweet. I don’t think I ever did that with my husband, but I love that the Doctor and Rose do. I guess, in a way, they would have to, as there isn’t really any concept of “passing time” on the TARDIS. They can’t really look at each other and say, “we’re celebrating our first week anniversary” - well, I guess the Doctor could, but from Rose’s POV, counting shags I guess makes it easier to keep track? LOL. I don’t know.
I love the Doctor losing control - doing things like “struggling for coherence” while she’s licking him and “hips thrusting toward her helplessly” - I love the way you write that.
I did have concern for the broken teacups on the floor. LOL. If the Doctor isn’t buttoning up his shirt, are we led to believe that he’s put on his shoes? There is broken glass on the floor!
I have to laugh every time you make reference to the milk turning sour to determine the length of time spent in the Vortex. I shall make it my new Chaosverse drinking game, I think. *grins* As an ending line - I adore it.
What is it that the Doctor murmurs in her ear? He’s constantly murmuring things in Galifreyan to her and it just kills me that she never asks about it! Well, except for that one time with the vows. But seriously! If I were with an alien and he talked alien to me in bed, I’d be curious as to what he was saying! To argue that point, though, I do like that it seems to be what happens when the Doctor loses control in sex... Just... why has Rose never asked why Galifreyan doesn’t translate? I know I assumed that she probably had at some missing scene and therefore, doesn’t concern herself with it, just taking for granted that he sometimes speaks in Galifreyan and has just accepted the fact that there are times when she won’t understand it. But then she has kids later on, and I’m sure she walked in to the Doctor and the children talking to each other in Galifreyan - and I can imagine the kids telling her what words mean and things... by the time she and the Doctor are older, wouldn’t she have some sort of grasp for the language? Do you think that she’s been learning as she goes? Do we ever learn what it is that the Doctor says to her and she says to him when they do their vows? Were they marriage vows?
I know - I’m ahead of the game a bit, but it just struck me as curious.
And finally - I think anytime the Doctor has to hang on to the kitchen table in order to keep it from moving across the floor with his very manly sexual thrusting - that is a good shag fic. *grins* Very sexy.
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Re: Things Continue to Progress part 3
Date: 2011-08-28 09:35 pm (UTC)I love the Doctor losing control - doing things like “struggling for coherence” while she’s licking him and “hips thrusting toward her helplessly” - I love the way you write that.
I did have concern for the broken teacups on the floor. LOL. If the Doctor isn’t buttoning up his shirt, are we led to believe that he’s put on his shoes? There is broken glass on the floor!
I have to laugh every time you make reference to the milk turning sour to determine the length of time spent in the Vortex. I shall make it my new Chaosverse drinking game, I think. *grins* As an ending line - I adore it.
What is it that the Doctor murmurs in her ear? He’s constantly murmuring things in Galifreyan to her and it just kills me that she never asks about it! Well, except for that one time with the vows. But seriously! If I were with an alien and he talked alien to me in bed, I’d be curious as to what he was saying! To argue that point, though, I do like that it seems to be what happens when the Doctor loses control in sex... Just... why has Rose never asked why Galifreyan doesn’t translate? I know I assumed that she probably had at some missing scene and therefore, doesn’t concern herself with it, just taking for granted that he sometimes speaks in Galifreyan and has just accepted the fact that there are times when she won’t understand it. But then she has kids later on, and I’m sure she walked in to the Doctor and the children talking to each other in Galifreyan - and I can imagine the kids telling her what words mean and things... by the time she and the Doctor are older, wouldn’t she have some sort of grasp for the language? Do you think that she’s been learning as she goes? Do we ever learn what it is that the Doctor says to her and she says to him when they do their vows? Were they marriage vows?
I know - I’m ahead of the game a bit, but it just struck me as curious.
And finally - I think anytime the Doctor has to hang on to the kitchen table in order to keep it from moving across the floor with his very manly sexual thrusting - that is a good shag fic. *grins* Very sexy.