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Title - Something About Stars (8/20)
Author - [livejournal.com profile] earlgreytea68 
Rating - General 
Characters - Ten, Rose, OCs
Spoilers - Through the specials.   
Disclaimer - I don't own them and I don't make money off of them, but I don't like to dwell on that, so let's move on. (Except for the kids, they're all mine.)
Summary - Four Time Lords and a Bad Wolf human, gallivanting through time and space. What could possibly go wrong?
Author's Notes - Huge thanks to Kristin and [livejournal.com profile] chicklet73 , who talked through plot points. Special thanks to Kristin for coming up with the title. And even more thanks to [livejournal.com profile] jlrpuck  and c73, who so graciously beta'd.

The icon was created by [livejournal.com profile] swankkat , commissioned by [livejournal.com profile] jlrpuck   for my birthday. 

Prologue - Ch 1 - Ch 2 - Ch 3 - Ch 4 - Ch 5 - Ch 6 

 

Chapter Seven

It had to be about Cunodys. It was too much of a coincidence for both his father and him to notice that Athena had been going to Cunodys. Coincidences did not tend to follow Time Lords around. Things seldom didn’t happen for a reason.

So it had to be about Cunodys.

Brem had never been to Cunodys before. He had never had reason to. But he was willing to bet, if Athena had been dating a Cunodysian, that the planet was home to creatures with tentacles.

Brem materialized his TARDIS and opened the door and found himself staring at a barren, deserted landscape. Not just barren and deserted. Ruined. Destroyed. Crumpled buildings and devastated streets, and that silence that only inhabits the shadow of Something Very Bad. Brem did not leave the safety of his TARDIS. He stared out at what had clearly been a grand city and breathed, “What happened here?”

He stepped back into his TARDIS and closed the door and thought. He had taken a wild stab at the time that Athena would have been visiting the planet. He’d clearly been very far off. But he had been just in time for something. Something terrible and awful and there were no coincidences.

He rested his hand on his TARDIS’s console, thought, and then flipped some controls, swinging through the Vortex. He stepped out again into Matt’s living room. Matt was on the sofa, a basketball game on the television.

Brem sat on the other end of the couch. “I need a right-hand man,” he said, without preamble.

Matt looked at him. “For what?”

“The time skips have to do with Cunodys, and something happened on Cunodys, something—” Brem cut himself off, narrowing his eyes at Matt, who looked…off. “You okay?”

“Have you talked to your sister?” Matt asked.

Brem lifted his eyebrows. “Should I have?”

“Yes,” snapped Matt.

“Which sister?”

“She took all of her DVDs,” seethed Matt. “Can you imagine? Doing something petty like that?”

“Athena, then,” concluded Brem.

“I mean, honestly,” continued Matt, ignoring him, “of all the childish things to do—”

“You do know they’re not technically DVDs, they’re a collection of technologies from—” Matt glared at him. “Sorry,” he said. He was silent for a second. “What the hell happened?” he asked, finally.

“Somehow, someway, this is your fault,” Matt told him.

“Oh, I’ve no doubt,” Brem agreed, solemnly.

“For not telling her about Kelly.”

“Who’s Kelly?”

“My girlfriend.”

“Oh. That. Matt, I didn’t—”

“And then Athena was completely irrational and took her DVDs—”

“You are oddly fixated on the DVDs,” remarked Brem.

“I’m not fixated on anything! I’m not—” Matt cut himself off and sighed, closing his eyes and leaning his head back on the couch. “What are you here for again? Oh, right-hand man, was that it?”

“Yeah, but it doesn’t—”

“I would follow her anywhere. I would spend every minute I have chasing after her through time and space. What does she not understand about that? There is nothing in my life here that is nearly as important as she is. All she has to do is ask me.”

“Have you told her that?”

“No. I decided it was wiser to take her at face value the first dozen times she rejected me.”

“Matt, that was in college. That’s unfair. She was a kid—”

“No,” Matt said, sharply, and opened his eyes. “It’s the most obvious thing in the world, Brem. She’s supposed to be some brilliant alien. She can figure it out without my being the one with the broken heart. Again.”

Brem paused. “She doesn’t know many humans, Matt. She knows Kate. Who said no when I asked her. So there’s some precedent that…She just needs a little time.”

“Which I don’t have. Not the way you mean it when you say it. Never mind. It doesn’t matter. It’s just that I’m not in the mood for an adventure right now, so can you do the right-hand man thing without me for a bit?”

“Yeah. It’ll keep anyway.” Brem stood up. He could go back to Cunodys at a different time in its history in a few hours’ time, and the few hours wouldn’t make much difference, in a world where he possessed a time machine. “Come and show me an Earth bar, Matthew. You can get drunk, and I can use my fabulous coat to pull us the prettiest girls there.”

“I have a girlfriend,” Matt reminded him.

He shrugged. “So I’ll use my fabulous coat to pull myself the prettiest girl there.”

“You and that coat,” said Matt, but he stood up and said, “You’re buying. You’re not flitting off and leaving me with the bill.”

Brem looked indignant. “Would I do that?”

“You have done it. And on planets where I didn’t have any money.”

“That’s because there were planet-ending events going on, Matt! Who can quibble about a bar bill when the planet may be ending?”

“You know, I don’t believe you anymore when you use that excuse. You’re like the boy who cried wolf.”

“An interesting cultural reference,” remarked Brem, watching Matt check that his door was locked behind them. “On Bou, you know, you encounter a similar story, only it’s about men claiming they’re not wearing toupees. ‘You’re like the man who said it really is that thick and luxurious,’ that’s what they say.”

“You’re totally making that up.”

“Wouldn’t I make up something better than that, if I was making it up?”

“God, I hope so.” Matt considered. “There’s something vaguely filthy about that saying. I mean, it just sounds like it should be.”

“Yeah, I’ve always thought so, too. Are we driving?” Brem asked, hopefully. “I could be the designated driver and drive us home.”

Matt barked laughter. “Do you think I’ve forgotten that you crashed my car the last time you ‘borrowed’ it?”

Brem pouted. “I’ve gotten better.”

“You haven’t. I know you haven’t. We’ll walk. Don’t pout, I know you run for a living, practically, you can handle walking a few blocks.”

Brem swept back his coat and stuck his hands into the pockets of his jeans. “I’m sorry,” he said, abruptly.

“What?” Matt looked at him in surprise. “For what?”

“I…I don’t know. Is it my fault? It feels like it might be a little bit my fault.”

“It’s not. Don’t worry about it.”

“Well, you said it was.”

“I didn’t mean it.”

“I know, but…I can talk to her, you know.”

“Don’t.”

“I know you always say that, but I don’t know if you’re right to tell me not to. I could get it sorted in two sentences, Matt.”

“Don’t.”

Brem sighed. “You’re very stubborn.”

“Pot, kettle.” There was a beat. “What’s that cultural reference on Toupee World?”

“You know,” mused Brem, “I don’t actually know.”

“You’re failing me.”

“I’ll try not to in the future.”

Matt paused by the entrance to the nearest neighborhood bar. “Seriously. Thank you for the offer. But don’t.”

Brem nodded shortly.

Matt nodded toward the door. “Go on. Show off your coat.”

Molto bene,” said Brem.

***

It had to be about Cunodys. It was too much of a coincidence for both Brem and him to notice that Athena had been going to Cunodys. Coincidences did not tend to follow Time Lords around. Things seldom didn’t happen for a reason.

So it had to be about Cunodys.

The Doctor opened his TARDIS on a world covered in snow. He stood in the doorway and stuck his hands in his pockets and looked at it for a long moment, trying to figure out what it all meant. Cunodys. Had he ever been there before? It rang no bells, he could think of nothing significant about it. So why, suddenly, when Athena had visited it, did it start provoking time skips? He frowned.

Rose looked over his shoulder. “Oh!” she exclaimed. “A snow world! I have a new parka, wait a second.” He heard her rush off for her new parka.

He stepped cautiously out into the snow and paused. He didn’t know what he’d expected to happen. Did he think he would suddenly start skipping through time? But everything kept working normally. His frown deepened. He tilted his head back, looking up into the falling snow. What was it about this planet? What could it possibly be?

He heard Rose exit the TARDIS behind him, closing the door. He opened his mouth to tell her they were on Cunodys, and he was investigating, and they needed to figure out what about this place was so important.

And then Rose said, “Look! Ood!”

The Doctor stopped staring up into the sky, looking where Rose was pointing. There were indeed Ood. Three of them, standing and watching them as curiously as an Ood could watch anything.

“Where are we?” Rose asked him. He looked at her to find her sending him her teeth-tongue grin. “’S it related to Sanctuary Base 6?”

“No,” he said, honestly. “Or maybe. It’s…It’s Cunodys.”

“Cunodys?”

“Athena’d been making a lot of trips here. She said she was dating someone here.” The Doctor looked back at the Ood. “Athena was dating an Ood?”

Rose was silent for a second. “I hate to say it, but, well…tentacles, kind of.”

The Doctor shook his head, looking at the Ood, and realized something. “They’re calling me.”

“What?”

“They’re calling me. In the song. In my head. They’re calling me.”

Rose looked from him to the Ood and back again. “Why?”

“Dunno. Let’s find out.” He strode quickly out over the snow, Rose trailing in his wake, until they reached the Ood.

Who spoke first. “Doctor,” said one of them. “We’ve been waiting for you.”

Next Chapter

 


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Date: 2010-04-15 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teikachikata.livejournal.com
Oh, the plot thickens. Can't wait for the next update.

Date: 2010-04-15 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Yes, this is a bit plotty at the end, isn't it? ;-)

Date: 2010-04-15 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tribalmink.livejournal.com
ooh! I love the banter between Matt and Brem. It's so sweet how Matt talks about Athena. <3 I never thought twice about Athena's taste for men with tentacles but an Ood?! Ick! Esp because we know what they look like!

“On Bou, you know, you encounter a similar story, only it’s about men claiming they’re not wearing toupees.

LOL!

Date: 2010-04-15 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Awww, thank you! I love Matt and Brem, too! And also how very much a romantic Matt is at heart. ;-)

As for the Ood thing, well, that's explained a bit more at a later point, I promise.
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Date: 2010-04-15 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tripocket.livejournal.com
The oominous oombiance is ooltimately due to odd ood. Oobviously.

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Date: 2010-04-15 01:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orelle-peredhil.livejournal.com
Oh, dear. This just keeps getting more and more complicated. I do not like this Cunodys, not one bit. Something's most definitely off. And poor dear Matt. FIX IT PLEASE BEFORE WE ALL DIE OF PAIN.

Oh, my heart can't take these once a week updates!

Date: 2010-04-15 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
I'm sorry! I know, I am drawing this out in a very torturous way, aren't I? ;-)

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Date: 2010-04-15 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aceofannwn.livejournal.com
*cackles* The toupee thing was great.

And, oh dear. Poor Matt. The problem is, Time Lords might be older chronologically, but that doesn't mean they really are. I suspect Matt doesn't know how much of a kid Athena actually was. Like, developmentally.

Date: 2010-04-15 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Matt really doesn't, but I think Matt is also frustrated. To him, time is ticking quickly, while Athena dithers about. He's obsessed with that lately, it's creeping into all of his conversations, really.

Date: 2010-04-15 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tripocket.livejournal.com
Kate said no. I realize there is a ton more in this chapter. *hugs Matt tight*

Kate said no. I didn't think she would say yes.. but I'd hoped a little bit for his sake.

Very interesting twist that planet is different for each person landing there. Also, I'm loving the awesome buddy flick quality of Brem and Matt. *squishes them both*

*sigh* I love this world. :)

PS. I edited this so much I'm not sure it makes sense any more so just to be sure I get my point across ME LIKEY.

Date: 2010-04-15 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Ah, yes, Kate said no. I tried to slide that in there. ;-)

And hahahaha! I love that you describe them as having a "buddy flick quality." That delights me. Brem and Matt have travelled together, and they've had adventures, and I bet they're great fun.

Date: 2010-04-15 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rusta-wilwarin.livejournal.com
First, YAY for a new chapter!!
Second, Kate said no? :( That makes me sad. I mean, I know not everyone can be Rose and the Doctor, but still... Not even for a bit?
Third, LOL at the Bou toupee line.
Fourth (this is turning out longer than I originally thought it would be), I'm with the Doctor. OOD?!? I'm hoping they're just there to get him, like at the end of TWoM, and NOT because Theenie was dating an Ood.
Fifth, oh Matt. I love his fixation on the DVD's as a kind of substitute for the real problem. Which leads me to...
Lastly (finally), WHY DID YOU NOT FIX THEM YET??!?! I second [livejournal.com profile] ginamak's comment about that.

Date: 2010-04-15 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
I promise there will be a story about Kate. Everyone is being very patient about it, and I am bring cruel, but I promise to eventually write and post it.

There is lots not fixed in this chapter: Matt, Athena, ood... ;-)

Date: 2010-04-15 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lorelaisquared.livejournal.com
love, Love, LOVE! this chapter! So many things I want to quote and talk about. I'm going to have to tone it down a bit I think.

Okay, first, I LOVE the not so subtle parallel between the Doctor and Brem. Having them both start out with almost the same exact thought process was brilliant. I love it when you can see just how alike they are. Very nicely done.

It is VERY worrying that Cunodys was destroyed when Brem got there. Most worrying indeed. I'm glad Brem didn't just charge forth without back up and I'm SO glad he went to visit Matt. Somehow I think Matt very much needed a visit from his best friend.

The conversation about the DVD's was amusing even though it was also very sad. Poor Matt. I love how he automatically blames Brem. And how Brem just accepts it. LOLOLOL.

THIS Was hands down the BEST line in the story: “I would follow her anywhere. I would spend every minute I have chasing after her through time and space. What does she not understand about that? There is nothing in my life here that is nearly as important as she is. All she has to do is ask me.”

*Melts* Oh, Matt, sweetheart - TELL HER! Brem's right, Athena doesn't have much experience with humans and she's way too close to pick up on any of the signs. Also, there's this whole thing where she's in complete denial about being in love with you.

She can figure it out without my being the one with the broken heart. Again.” Awwwwww, Matt. *hugs* Love is hard, isn't it? See, the thing about Time Lords is that sometimes they are so THICK (because, of course, they think they know everything) that you have to be VERY BLUNT with them. I'm not worried though. I'm sure you'll figure it out. otherwise my heart will be broken too

She knows Kate. Who said no when I asked her. So there’s some precedent that… OOOOH! A hint about what happened with Kate. But did she say no to what I'm thinking she said no to? One day you are going to end my agony of wanting to know what happened to Kate right? *tries very, very hard to be patient*


HAHAHAHAHA I love that Brem works the coat. Coat's are very important to Time Lord's I suppose (and to immortal ex time agents who double as uncles).

*sporfle* On Bou, you know, you encounter a similar story, only it’s about men claiming they’re not wearing toupees. ‘You’re like the man who said it really is that thick and luxurious,’ that’s what they say.” BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Classic and hysterical line. Where do you come up with this stuff? Marvelous. Really. I laughed so loud when I first read that line. Really. I'm sure my neighbours are wondering what's wrong with me.

Adore the banter between Brem and Matt for the rest of the scene. They're so much like brothers. I'm so glad that Brem has such a good friend. Makes me wonder how different the Doctor would have been (and how much happier) if he'd had someone like Matt around. I really think Matt should just be made an honourary member of the family - he's *that* wonderful! (or, you know, he could just Marry Athena, that would work too! :))

The Ood were an interesting twist. Although it left me wondering if the Doctor had navigated correctly or if the Ood had somehow intercepted him and they're not on Cunodys after all. I guess we'll find out in the next chapter? Either way, just the idea that Athena may have dated an Ood had me howling. So did not even consider that, or see it coming. I mean, how would you even kiss an Ood? (And why am I even pondering this question?) Surely all the tentacles would get in the way.

Anyway, great, great, great chapter. My only complaint is that is over and now I have to wait a whole entire week for more.

Date: 2010-04-15 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
"I'm going to have to tone it down a bit I think."

lol

"Having them both start out with almost the same exact thought process was brilliant."

I love the idea that Brem and the Doctor are running parallel investigations. Oh, those two. Why don't they just work *together*?

"Somehow I think Matt very much needed a visit from his best friend."

Awww, he did. Poor Matt.

"Oh, Matt, sweetheart - TELL HER!"

I really think he has. A lot. But Athena didn't take him seriously.

"See, the thing about Time Lords is that sometimes they are so THICK (because, of course, they think they know everything) that you have to be VERY BLUNT with them. I'm not worried though. I'm sure you'll figure it out."

This is so true. Matt needs to have a chat with Rose...

"One day you are going to end my agony of wanting to know what happened to Kate right?"

Someday, I promise! ;-)

"Where do you come up with this stuff?"

I honestly don't know.

"Makes me wonder how different the Doctor would have been (and how much happier) if he'd had someone like Matt around."

It was Rose who insisted that her children be more socialized than the Doctor. I think she realized how very lonely her Doctor was, more than he realizes it himself. Friends are important and necessary.

As for the Ood, no hints!

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Date: 2010-04-15 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] outforawalk.livejournal.com
As usual, I love the interaction between Matt and Brem. I love that Matt was able to tell Brem he just wasn't up to being the right hand man right now. It seems like the mark of just how much trust they have in their friendship, which makes me feel squishy. EVEN IF ATHENA AND MATT ARE CURRENTLY A TEENY BIT BROKEN.

The Doctor's reaction to Athena dating an Ood in comparison with Rose just pointing out the tentacles makes me laugh. You've come a long way, baby. (I don't think I could be so understanding of my daughter's tentacle love. I'm species-ist like that. The alien should at least look Time Lord.)

I love having regular updates from you to look forward to, but at the same time I really want to know what happens next ASAP. Oi.

Date: 2010-04-17 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
It's true, that Matt and Brem are extremely comfortable friends. Neither feels it necessary to pretend with the other, which they need. Brem has two little sisters, but not a ton of friends, and Matt is an only child, so in a way they fulfill a brotherly role for each other that they are both missing.

And Rose has gotten to be open-minded. Plus, she knows Jack. Omnisexuality and all that. ;-)

Date: 2010-04-15 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crimedoc1.livejournal.com
Oh dear! Or should that be Ooood dear! This is very ominous.

Love the Brem/Matt relationship. And the COAT! You know, we need a Brem action figure. With coat, of course. Or perhaps a coat action figure with optional Brem accessory?

Time Lords, including female Time Lords, seem seriously clueless about relationships. I mean, they are positively thick! From Thicksville! Athena! Catch the clue bus already! FIX THIS!!!

And please PLEASE one of these days tell us what really happened with Kate and Brem.

Date: 2010-04-17 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Oh, the Ood puns! ;-)

Hahahaha! I love the idea that it would be a coat action figure with an optional Brem accessory! I think Brem would approve of that, too!

But yes, Time Lords all have a gene that makes them terrible at relationships. It's mostly that they just *think* differently than humans do.

And yes, I promise to someday get all of you the Brem/Kate fic. I've been torturing you with this for far too long!

Date: 2010-04-15 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] auntiesuze.livejournal.com
“Somehow, someway, this is your fault,” Matt told him.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I'm not sure this line was supposed to strike me quite as funny as it did. XD

Poor Matt! Athena obviously cares about him far more than she let on (given the fight and removal of the not-DVDs, etc.). They SO need to work this out. They're so adorable!

Yes, you do need to write the Kate story at some point, just so we know what happened. It won't be all happy, obviously, but I hate not knowing (though I can vaguely guess how it went down).

Oh god...the toupee bit. Think Jack ever "cried toupee"? LOLOLOL

I wonder what the heck happened to Cunodys (assuming that's where both Brem and the Doctor landed - or Brem, at least). Definitely bad, bad things going on there.

And now the Ood are involved? Curiouser and curiouser....

Date: 2010-04-17 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
"I'm not sure this line was supposed to strike me quite as funny as it did."

Heh. It was supposed to be funny! ;-)

Ah, all these faily lovers, all around.

As for "cried toupee" -- that is BRILLIANT. Hahahaha.

Date: 2010-04-15 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feebeeglee.livejournal.com
i love this with a loving love. i shall use my Holmes and Watson icon to commemorate the greatness that is Brem and Matt. Love love love.

Date: 2010-04-15 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-palimpsest.livejournal.com
AH! I was reading an article on the new Holmes in Empire and was disgusted that when mentioning pas Holmeses Brett didn't get a mention. And he was the best.

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Date: 2010-04-15 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hence-the-name.livejournal.com
Ooooood! I <3 the Ood.

I really like how you started off both sections with the same text--gave us a sense of time skipping. :)

Date: 2010-04-15 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostmoon71.livejournal.com
Yes. Cool effect, that. You're good. Very, very good!

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Date: 2010-04-15 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-palimpsest.livejournal.com
Soo . . . . exactly how prehensile are an ood's Tenticles?

Date: 2010-04-15 03:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feebeeglee.livejournal.com
I actually recoiled in disgust when I read that. EW EW EW. (EW!)

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Date: 2010-04-15 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morningroses.livejournal.com
Why are these chapters so short!?! It's infuriating! Just when it's getting good. Okay so I adored the parallel between Brem and the Doctor with the starting paragraphs and I really like the Doctor/Rose adventure it makes me happy to see that even after so many years and three children it's just the same as always The Doctor and Rose Tyler in the TARDIS bouncing through time and space. I think this may be your best story yet! Well done!

Date: 2010-04-17 04:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
I know, the chapters are short, but they really kind of needed to stand on their own and keep the pacing slow here. They get longer as the pace picks up, I promise.

I agree that it's very sweet to see the Doctor and Rose on an adventure together, all these years later. I never really write them at this "age," and I should, because I think it would be fun.

Glad you're enjoying the fic!

Date: 2010-04-15 04:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostmoon71.livejournal.com
Alright, obviously I need to find some time to read more of your 'verse because WHO IS KATE and what did she say no to and why. I've got to learn more about this.

I haven't read much else in the 'verse, but I'm smitten with Matt and Athena and I'm on board: FIX THIS.

Also, the coat. I can see that Brem, much like his father, must have mastered the "overcoat effect"--the more clothes a man has on (tie, coat, scarf even) the more you want to take them off. :)



Date: 2010-04-15 06:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stormwolf10.livejournal.com
I'm sure others will have more detailed answers, but in short, Kate was Brem's girlfriend in college. EGT68 has been cruel in not telling us what happened and why they're no longer together. ;)

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Date: 2010-04-15 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fishface44.livejournal.com
Holy Bernard Cribbins, Batman!!! Talk about a feeling of impending doom!!!!!

And on a much sweeter note: “I would follow her anywhere. I would spend every minute I have chasing after her through time and space. What does she not understand about that? There is nothing in my life here that is nearly as important as she is. All she has to do is ask me.” *squeezes Matt* What a gorgeous speech!! I just love Matt!!!!

Date: 2010-04-17 04:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Ah, yes, I kind of enjoyed putting Matt's romantic speech in a chapter with such foreboding at the end! Because I'm mean like that. ;-)

Date: 2010-04-15 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glass-moment.livejournal.com
You know, now I'm thinking about that Confidential where David Tennant is talking about wanting to gnaw on an Ood...*wince*

Also I want a chaosverse interlude that is The Adventures of Brem and Matt. They are the BEST.

Date: 2010-04-19 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Huh. Gnawing on an Ood, that...*is* inappropriate.

And awww! I love Brem and Matt, so that delights me!

Date: 2010-04-15 11:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rosewarren.livejournal.com
Ooh! Exciting cliffhanger. My heart broke for Matt.

“I would follow her anywhere. I would spend every minute I have chasing after her through time and space. What does she not understand about that? There is nothing in my life here that is nearly as important as she is. All she has to do is ask me.”

“Have you told her that?”

“No. I decided it was wiser to take her at face value the first dozen times she rejected me.”


*sob*

Date: 2010-04-19 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Poor Matt. My heart breaks for him, too, I am very mean.

Date: 2010-04-15 11:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dudewithak.livejournal.com
For the record, I love the interaction between Brem and Matt! Their friendship is both so strange and awesomely cool.

Great chapter, I can't wait to read more! Keep up the outstanding work!

Date: 2010-04-19 02:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Thanks! I admit I love the Matt/Brem friendship, too, so I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Date: 2010-04-15 12:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beatlejessie.livejournal.com
I think that the only thing I dislike about this story is that we have to wait ANOTHER FREAKING WEEK for the next chapter!!!! GAAAAAAH!!!

But seriously, wonderful as usual. The Brem/Doctor parallel was perfect (though talk about being from Thickania.... just work together, guys!!!) and poor Matt nearly broke my heart with that speech.

Date: 2010-04-19 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
I know, I am *torturing* everyone this time around. ;-)

Brem and the Doctor are both natural loners, I think. Which is not to say they don't love having people around, because they do, just that their first inclination is almost never to ask for help.

And oh, poor Matt.

Date: 2010-04-15 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glorious-clio.livejournal.com
Ooh... Poor Matt. And "She knows Kate. Who said no when I asked her." He clearly asked the wrong Kate. *ahem

They'll figure it out! They will, they will! And an Ood? How Odd.... *old joke is old.

Date: 2010-04-19 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Ha! Brem *did* ask the wrong Kate! Maybe he will ask people around the universe named Kate. ;-)

Oh, the Ood jokes! Ood jokes galore!

Date: 2010-04-15 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beingfacetious.livejournal.com
OOD! I love you for Ood!
"she said no!" I hate you for Kate vagueness!
At least these things balance out.

Seriously though, another really lovely chapter. Never mind I'm supposed to be working on a draft for a grant proposal, this is so much better. :D

Date: 2010-04-19 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Hahahaha! It's such a love/hate thing. And I am SO CRUEL with the vagueness, I know. I'm *hinting.* I'm *setting a foundation.* ;-)

Date: 2010-04-16 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] susanb03.livejournal.com
OOOOOOOH and that's a NASTY place to leave it! :)

Date: 2010-04-19 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Ha! I am a mean person, studies have proven it.

Date: 2010-04-16 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azriona.livejournal.com
ooooooooooo. You're not pulling The End of Time into this, are you?

Also, I liked the conversation between Brem and Matt, but I can't quite figure out why, and that's probably due to it being past my bedtime. But then, everything is past my bedtime these days, so really, I might never think of it.

Date: 2010-04-19 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
I feel like I'm close enough to the next posting, where I think it will become extremely obvious, so I feel able to tell you: DING DING DING DING. You were the only one who really guessed it so overtly! Go, you!

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