Blink of an Eye (1/1)
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Rating - General
Characters - Doctor, Rose, Jackie
Spoilers - Through S2
Disclaimer - I don't own them and I don't make money off of them, but I don't like to dwell on that, so let's move on.
Summary - A re-telling of "Rose."
Author's Notes - This is EdgeofWorld's Support Stacie fic. She has graciously agreed to share it with all of you.
People will tell you that your whole life can change in the blink of an eye. People tell you that all the time. Or maybe that’s just my mum. You never know, she says. Tomorrow you could be hit by a car. She says that because that’s what happened to my dad, when I was a baby. On a day like every other day, he was hit by a car, and my whole life changed in the blink of an eye, when I was too young to even know it. People tell you things like this, all the time.
You don’t believe them.
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The Doctor was an alien who knew things about blinks of eyes. He knew that, in a human being, blinking occurred to lubricate the eye and rid it of irritants. He knew that an average adult human being should blink around ten times a minute, but that human beings sometimes got distracted--by the flow of a good plot in a story, for instance—and forgot all about blinking and dried their eyes out and it was all a bit of a mess. The only time a human being should avoid blinking was if there was a Weeping Angel hovering about but the Doctor hadn’t seen a Weeping Angel for centuries now and he wasn’t sure if they had managed to survive…
But that human expression, “blink of an eye,” had always irritated him. Things did not happen in a blink of an eye, not when you stopped to think about them, not really. Maybe he had pressed the button in a blink of an eye, but the actions leading up to that had taken forever, they had gone on interminably, there had been a million opportunities where the action could have been avoided. It had not been a blink of an eye.
And anyway it had been forever ago.
The point was that it wasn’t a blink of an eye that was about to change the life of the young blonde who had wandered into the basement full of Autons, because she had made a whole series of decisions that had led to this moment, but he supposed he could excuse her feeling like it was, or that she had been saved in the blink of an eye in which he leaned over and grabbed her hand and said, “Run.”
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Her name was Rose, she’d said. And so, when the door swung open on the small flat in this housing estate in London, he was able to say, “Rose.” And then, “Oh, of course.”
She stared at him for a second. “’Of course’ what? What are you doin’ here? Did you follow me?”
“No. But I followed this.” He gestured with his sonic screwdriver. “Which led to you.”
“And what’s that? Oi,” she protested, when he zapped it at her, and snatched it out of his hand before he could react.
“Give that back,” he protested.
“Get in here. We need to talk.” She pocked the screwdriver and stalked away from him into the flat.
The Doctor, frowning and grumbling, had no choice but to follow her.
“Who is it?” called the voice of someone else in the flat.
“It’s about last night,” answered Rose. “He’s part of the inquiry. Give us ten minutes.”
“She deserves compensation,” the voice retorted.
The Doctor paused in the bedroom doorway, looking at the woman sitting at the dressing table. Mother, he thought. Had to be. “Compensation for what?” he asked.
The woman gasped and looked at him. “She was almost killed!” Then she paused and smiled. “I’m in my dressing gown,” she purred at him.
The Doctor’s smile widened. “So you are,” he remarked, winked, and then went in search of wherever Rose had disappeared to.
She was in the lounge, hurriedly trying to straighten it up.
“D’you think you could give me back my sonic screwdriver now?” he asked.
“What is that?”
“It’s my…secret…weapon…device…thingy.”
“Oh.” She pulled it out of her pocket. “You mean this thing?”
“Yes—“
“Then no.” It disappeared back into her pocket. “You’re not getting this secret weapon device thingy back until I get answers.”
The Doctor leaned against the wall, crossing his arms and his ankles. “You’re holding me hostage here.”
“You can leave whenever you want, without your—what’d you call it?--sonic screwdriver? Or you can really tell me what a sonic screwdriver is. And then you can tell me exactly what went on last night, with the mannequins.”
“You don’t think it’s a student prank anymore?”
She gave him a look. “There was an explosion.”
“Wellllllll. If you want to know all that and the scientific description of a sonic screwdriver, we’re going to be here for a while.”
“Fine,” she said. “Want some coffee?”
He gave her an appraising look. “Yes. Coffee. Might as well.”
She disappeared into the adjoining kitchen. He wandered around the lounge, poking randomly into the belongings scattered about.
“So? Going to tell me?” she called from the kitchen.
“Tell you what?” He glanced at his reflection in the mirror, adjusted the careful haphazard of his fringe.
“Sonic screwdriver.” She over-enunciated the words, as if he was being thick, and he smiled at his reflection.
“It’s a screwdriver. Only sonic.”
He heard her mutter something about him. He didn’t quite catch what, but he could imagine.
“Done fussing with your hair?” she inquired, and he realized she’d re-entered the lounge.
He whirled around and tried not to look like he had been caught in the act, digging his hands into his pockets. She raised an eyebrow at him, and then, abruptly, she grinned at him, her tongue catching between her teeth.
The Doctor, suddenly, understood the expression blink of an eye.
“D’you hear that?” Rose turned from him, and from the coffee, frowning.
He did, now that she mentioned it. A scuffling sort of noise. “Have you got a cat?”
“No,” Rose answered, slowly. “Sounds like it’s coming from behind the couch.” She took a few steps backward, away from the couch, cautiously, not taking her eyes off of it.
“Give me the screwdriver,” he said, holding out his hand and also keeping his eyes on the couch. “Now.”
She didn’t hesitate, putting it into his hand. He twirled it in his hand for a second, then dropped to his knees and peered under the couch. “Aha,” he exclaimed, just as a plastic arm shot out at him. Rose uttered a small squeal of surprised alarm, but he pounced on the hand and sonicked it into submission, then stood and pocketed it. “There you go.” He smiled at her brightly. “Nothing to worry about.”
She was staring in the direction of his pocket. “How did that…?”
He winked at her. “Now. I’ve got to be off.”
“Wait, wait, wait.” She scurried after him as he walked out of the flat. “Off? Off where?”
“The plastic,” he said, not pausing as he jogged down the stairs. “It’s living.”
“Living plastic?” she repeated.
“Yeah. There’s this thing, called the Nestene Consciousness, controlling all the plastic. Thought control. You cut off the control, you cut off the living-ness of the plastic, but there’s too much plastic on this planet, and I can’t cut the control off of all of it until I get to the Nestene Consciousness. So that’s what I’m looking for. The Nestene Consciousness. Don’t supposed you’ve seen it?”
“I don’t know,” Rose answered. “What does it look like?”
He hadn’t expected her to respond, and he stopped and turned and looked down at her for a moment. Then he grinned. “It’s like a big pile of…gobbledy-gook-goo-smush-liquidy-glowing…stuff.”
“Ah,” said Rose, thoughtfully. “Can’t say I’ve seen anything like that.”
“Doesn’t matter.” The Doctor pulled the arm out of his pocket. “I’m going to reverse the polarity.”
“What?”
“Reverse the polarity, get the thought control back, figure out where the Nestene Consciousness is broadcasting from, and get there.”
“And how will you do all that?”
“It’s all very complicated. It involves sonic waves and the time-space vortex and a transdimensional semi-sentient being.”
“You talk a mile a minute, you know,” remarked Rose.
He chuckled. “Here’s the short version: I’ve got a ship.” And then, because it seemed like a good idea, he lifted one corner of his mouth up in the smile he’d learned to perfect since waking up with this particular regeneration. “Want to see it?”
***
“It’s bigger on the inside,” said Rose, and the Doctor said, “Is it? I hadn’t noticed.” He walked past her, putting the arm on the console and zapping it with the sonic screwdriver, getting a lock on the thought control. Then he looked back at Rose.
She was laying her hands on the coral.
“What do you think?”
“’S beautiful,” she breathed.
“Want to go for a ride?”
She looked at him, and he could tell she was slightly alarmed but mostly intrigued and excited and delighted. “Where?”
“Welllllllll, anywhere you want, eventually. But right now: Nestene Consciousness.”
It was back again, that teeth-tongue smile. “Okay,” she said.
***
“I would add ‘wobbly’ to your description,” whispered Rose, as they looked down at the Nestene Consciousness. She looked at him. He was pulling out a vial. “What’s that?”
“It’s a stopper for semisynthetic amorphous organic solids, polymers of high molecular mass. ‘Anti-plastic,’ to put it more simply.”
“Anti-plastic?” echoed Rose.
“Yeah, you sound like you don’t believe me. From the same blokes that make anti-matter. Fantastic company.”
Rose shook her head a bit. “Okay, well, pour it in.”
He shook his head. “No. It gets one chance.” He turned to her. “Stay here, stay out of sight.” Then he stood and walked confidently toward the Nestene Consciousness, hands in his pockets. “Am I addressing the Nestene Consciousness?”
The blob of plastic answered in what Rose assumed was the affirmative.
“Excellent. So. Here on a spot of planetary destruction?” The Doctor sounded almost casual, but, upon the blobbering of the plastic, turned sharp, and Rose shivered in reaction. “Don’t blather about constitutional rights, this is an invasion. And you are going to stop it. Right now. Stop it and leave or you won’t like what happens next.” There was a pause while the plastic blobbered again. “I’m the Doctor,” he spat out, and then paused again to listen. “If I were you, I really wouldn’t bring that up,” he said, his voice dangerously low. He reached into his pocket, at the same moment that Rose realized two mannequins had come up behind him.
“Doctor!” she shouted.
He looked up at her, startled, and the mannequins grabbed hold of him. There was a bit of a scuffle, and Rose didn’t give herself time to think. She grabbed the chain nearest her and swung out over the glowing liquid plastic, solidly catching one mannequin and dumping him into the swirl of the blob. The Doctor, staggering slightly but one side now free, succeeded in grabbing his vial of anti-plastic and dumping it into the Nestene Consciousness.
Then he turned to Rose in amazement, catching her on her backswing.
“Bronze medal,” she said, grinning at him. “Jericho Street Junior School under 7s gymnastic team.”
“Molto bene,” he grinned back. “Now.” He slid his hand into hers. “Run.”
***
He was waiting for her, leaning up against his ship that looked like a box, hands in his pockets. His face was in shadows, and it was impossible to discern anything but the fact that his eyes were locked on her intensely.
“Everyone safe and sound?” he asked, as she came up to him.
She nodded. “What’s a police public call box?”
“Oh.” He glanced up at his ship. “It’s a disguise.”
“So.”
“So.”
“Did we save the world today?”
“We did.”
“Yeah. Pretty typical day, really.”
He smiled. “Come with me.”
She went still. “What?”
“Come with me.” He nodded toward the ship he was leaning on.
“Are you mad?”
He said nothing. He tipped one of those lethal smiles at her.
“What are you?” she asked.
He pushed off of the ship, walked over to her, took her hand. “The ground beneath our feet is spinning at a thousand miles an hour, and the entire planet is hurtling around the sun at sixty-seven thousand miles an hour. Can you feel it?”
She stared up at him. “No,” she whispered.
“I can. Come with me.”
“I have a…” She was going to say boyfriend. She settled for, “life.”
“You do. So why not live it? Anywhere in space and time, anywhere you like, we can go.” He paused. “In the blink of an eye.”
Author's Note: It's "Rose," re-told with Ten. I didn't want to give it all away in the top Author's Note, but EdgeofWorld's prompt was to put Ten in a Nine episode or Nine in a Ten episode. I went with this, and attempted to come up with a Doctor who had gotten to his tenth self without having met Rose. I thought he might have turned out manipulatively seductive, the way he is in flashes during S3 and S4. Anyway, quarrel, debate, tell me when you knew it was supposed to be Ten, tell me that you were just confused the whole way through!
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Date: 2010-01-09 02:18 am (UTC)I'll have to reread it while imagine DT instead of CE.
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Date: 2010-01-09 02:27 am (UTC)“It’s like a big pile of…gobbledy-gook-goo-smush-liquidy-glowing…stuff.”
and when I got to the "molto bene" I was definitely wondering if it was supposed to be Ten, or if your characterization of Nine was just *really* bad. I'm glad to say it was the former.
This is an intriguing idea, I may have to give it some thought myself...
Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2010-01-09 02:44 am (UTC)It's kind of hilarious, actually.
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Date: 2010-01-16 02:20 pm (UTC)I find it interesting, the idea that Rose might not have been as taken with a Doctor who was Ten first rather than her Nine. Actually, I find that *really* interesting. ::thinks thinky thoughts::
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Date: 2010-01-09 02:48 am (UTC)I quite liked it. I'm glad it didn't happen this way (which is not something I can often say about your stories!) because I love Nine and think Rose and the Doctor are a much better couple because she had to deal with and fall in love with Nine first. It would have been much too easy with Ten first.
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Date: 2010-01-09 02:57 am (UTC)Lovely story :)
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Date: 2010-01-09 03:38 am (UTC)*giggle*
No way Nine would say that!
Although I had my suspicions in the first paragraph when the Doctor was babbling on about blinking and dry eyes and weeping angels. Nine doesn't babble the way Ten does.
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Date: 2010-01-09 03:52 am (UTC)I could actually picture Nine referring to his secret weapon device thingy (in one of his goofier moments.) His mild reaction to Jackie in her dressing gown puzzled me slightly. The hair arranging made me think of Ten, but by the time he said 'molto bene', I just wondered why Nine was using the wrong catchphrase.
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Date: 2010-01-10 02:31 pm (UTC)Supposedly, RTD claims he did not write Nine and Ten any differently, so I think, theoretically, we're supposed to be able to imagine Nine doing all of the things Ten does. But I just think Ten was way more casual about, well, being sexy, than Nine was.
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Date: 2010-01-09 03:57 am (UTC)Of course, I was picturing him in the original Hamlet outfit rather than the brown suit, or mayhaps the recent jacket. And he was whipping out that husky purr on a regular basis - especially during the spinning-earth speech. Mrowr.
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Date: 2010-01-09 04:48 am (UTC)I. Love. You. :)
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Date: 2010-01-09 04:49 am (UTC)Favorite line: The Doctor, suddenly, understood the expression blink of an eye.
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Date: 2010-01-10 02:34 pm (UTC)And I also liked the idea that all Doctors are blindsided by Rose's impact on them, even one as self-assured as the Tenth Doctor I've imagined here.
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Date: 2010-01-09 05:15 am (UTC)This was a fun approach. I'd love to read more!
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Date: 2010-01-09 05:30 am (UTC)I guess I should have figured it out when he said, “It’s my…secret…weapon…device…thingy.”
You did a good job with this, although I'm such a huge Nine fan that it's slightly disturbing to picture Ten in that episode. lol.
Thanks for sharing with all of us!
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Date: 2010-01-10 02:36 pm (UTC)I agree that it's a bit disturbing, but it's fascinating to imagine how the dynamic would have changed.
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Date: 2010-01-09 07:46 am (UTC)I should figured it out when he winked at Jackie or at the "welll" but it was the fussing with the fringe in the mirror that did it. At that point it clicked and I had to go back to the beginning and start again with the right Doctor in mind.
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Date: 2010-01-09 12:33 pm (UTC)The one bit I really miss is, "Lots of planets have a North!"
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Date: 2010-01-16 02:27 pm (UTC)I can see how the first paragraphs could easily have been Ten looking back on the whole thing. And possibly were I to write Ten looking back on the whole thing, it would sound very similar.
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Date: 2010-01-09 06:38 pm (UTC)I think it was completely brilliant! Thanks to you and EdgeofWorld for sharing it with us!
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Date: 2010-01-16 02:29 pm (UTC)Glad you enjoyed it!