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Title - Blink of an Eye (1/1)
Author - [livejournal.com profile] earlgreytea68 
Rating - General
Characters - Doctor, Rose, Jackie
Spoilers - Through S2
Disclaimer - I don't own them and I don't make money off of them, but I don't like to dwell on that, so let's move on. 
Summary - A re-telling of "Rose." 
Author's Notes - This is EdgeofWorld's Support Stacie fic. She has graciously agreed to share it with all of you.

 

People will tell you that your whole life can change in the blink of an eye. People tell you that all the time. Or maybe that’s just my mum. You never know, she says. Tomorrow you could be hit by a car. She says that because that’s what happened to my dad, when I was a baby. On a day like every other day, he was hit by a car, and my whole life changed in the blink of an eye, when I was too young to even know it. People tell you things like this, all the time.

You don’t believe them.

***

The Doctor was an alien who knew things about blinks of eyes. He knew that, in a human being, blinking occurred to lubricate the eye and rid it of irritants. He knew that an average adult human being should blink around ten times a minute, but that human beings sometimes got distracted--by the flow of a good plot in a story, for instance—and forgot all about blinking and dried their eyes out and it was all a bit of a mess. The only time a human being should avoid blinking was if there was a Weeping Angel hovering about but the Doctor hadn’t seen a Weeping Angel for centuries now and he wasn’t sure if they had managed to survive…

But that human expression, “blink of an eye,” had always irritated him. Things did not happen in a blink of an eye, not when you stopped to think about them, not really. Maybe he had pressed the button in a blink of an eye, but the actions leading up to that had taken forever, they had gone on interminably, there had been a million opportunities where the action could have been avoided. It had not been a blink of an eye.

And anyway it had been forever ago.

The point was that it wasn’t a blink of an eye that was about to change the life of the young blonde who had wandered into the basement full of Autons, because she had made a whole series of decisions that had led to this moment, but he supposed he could excuse her feeling like it was, or that she had been saved in the blink of an eye in which he leaned over and grabbed her hand and said, “Run.”

***

Her name was Rose, she’d said. And so, when the door swung open on the small flat in this housing estate in London, he was able to say, “Rose.” And then, “Oh, of course.”

She stared at him for a second. “’Of course’ what? What are you doin’ here? Did you follow me?”

“No. But I followed this.” He gestured with his sonic screwdriver. “Which led to you.”

“And what’s that? Oi,” she protested, when he zapped it at her, and snatched it out of his hand before he could react.

“Give that back,” he protested.

“Get in here. We need to talk.” She pocked the screwdriver and stalked away from him into the flat.

The Doctor, frowning and grumbling, had no choice but to follow her.

“Who is it?” called the voice of someone else in the flat.

“It’s about last night,” answered Rose. “He’s part of the inquiry. Give us ten minutes.”

“She deserves compensation,” the voice retorted.

The Doctor paused in the bedroom doorway, looking at the woman sitting at the dressing table. Mother, he thought. Had to be. “Compensation for what?” he asked.

The woman gasped and looked at him. “She was almost killed!” Then she paused and smiled. “I’m in my dressing gown,” she purred at him.

The Doctor’s smile widened. “So you are,” he remarked, winked, and then went in search of wherever Rose had disappeared to.

She was in the lounge, hurriedly trying to straighten it up.

“D’you think you could give me back my sonic screwdriver now?” he asked.

“What is that?”

“It’s my…secret…weapon…device…thingy.”

“Oh.” She pulled it out of her pocket. “You mean this thing?”

“Yes—“

“Then no.” It disappeared back into her pocket. “You’re not getting this secret weapon device thingy back until I get answers.”

The Doctor leaned against the wall, crossing his arms and his ankles. “You’re holding me hostage here.”

“You can leave whenever you want, without your—what’d you call it?--sonic screwdriver? Or you can really tell me what a sonic screwdriver is. And then you can tell me exactly what went on last night, with the mannequins.”

“You don’t think it’s a student prank anymore?”

She gave him a look. “There was an explosion.”

“Wellllllll. If you want to know all that and the scientific description of a sonic screwdriver, we’re going to be here for a while.”

“Fine,” she said. “Want some coffee?”

He gave her an appraising look. “Yes. Coffee. Might as well.”

She disappeared into the adjoining kitchen. He wandered around the lounge, poking randomly into the belongings scattered about.

“So? Going to tell me?” she called from the kitchen.

“Tell you what?” He glanced at his reflection in the mirror, adjusted the careful haphazard of his fringe.

“Sonic screwdriver.” She over-enunciated the words, as if he was being thick, and he smiled at his reflection.

“It’s a screwdriver. Only sonic.”

He heard her mutter something about him. He didn’t quite catch what, but he could imagine.

“Done fussing with your hair?” she inquired, and he realized she’d re-entered the lounge.

He whirled around and tried not to look like he had been caught in the act, digging his hands into his pockets. She raised an eyebrow at him, and then, abruptly, she grinned at him, her tongue catching between her teeth.

The Doctor, suddenly, understood the expression blink of an eye.

“D’you hear that?” Rose turned from him, and from the coffee, frowning.

He did, now that she mentioned it. A scuffling sort of noise. “Have you got a cat?”

“No,” Rose answered, slowly. “Sounds like it’s coming from behind the couch.” She took a few steps backward, away from the couch, cautiously, not taking her eyes off of it.

“Give me the screwdriver,” he said, holding out his hand and also keeping his eyes on the couch. “Now.”

She didn’t hesitate, putting it into his hand. He twirled it in his hand for a second, then dropped to his knees and peered under the couch. “Aha,” he exclaimed, just as a plastic arm shot out at him. Rose uttered a small squeal of surprised alarm, but he pounced on the hand and sonicked it into submission, then stood and pocketed it. “There you go.” He smiled at her brightly. “Nothing to worry about.”

She was staring in the direction of his pocket. “How did that…?”

He winked at her. “Now. I’ve got to be off.”

“Wait, wait, wait.” She scurried after him as he walked out of the flat. “Off? Off where?”

“The plastic,” he said, not pausing as he jogged down the stairs. “It’s living.”

“Living plastic?” she repeated.

“Yeah. There’s this thing, called the Nestene Consciousness, controlling all the plastic. Thought control. You cut off the control, you cut off the living-ness of the plastic, but there’s too much plastic on this planet, and I can’t cut the control off of all of it until I get to the Nestene Consciousness. So that’s what I’m looking for. The Nestene Consciousness. Don’t supposed you’ve seen it?”

“I don’t know,” Rose answered. “What does it look like?”

He hadn’t expected her to respond, and he stopped and turned and looked down at her for a moment. Then he grinned. “It’s like a big pile of…gobbledy-gook-goo-smush-liquidy-glowing…stuff.”

“Ah,” said Rose, thoughtfully. “Can’t say I’ve seen anything like that.”

“Doesn’t matter.” The Doctor pulled the arm out of his pocket. “I’m going to reverse the polarity.”

“What?”

“Reverse the polarity, get the thought control back, figure out where the Nestene Consciousness is broadcasting from, and get there.”

“And how will you do all that?”

“It’s all very complicated. It involves sonic waves and the time-space vortex and a transdimensional semi-sentient being.”

“You talk a mile a minute, you know,” remarked Rose.

He chuckled. “Here’s the short version: I’ve got a ship.” And then, because it seemed like a good idea, he lifted one corner of his mouth up in the smile he’d learned to perfect since waking up with this particular regeneration. “Want to see it?”

***

“It’s bigger on the inside,” said Rose, and the Doctor said, “Is it? I hadn’t noticed.” He walked past her, putting the arm on the console and zapping it with the sonic screwdriver, getting a lock on the thought control. Then he looked back at Rose.

She was laying her hands on the coral.

“What do you think?”

“’S beautiful,” she breathed.

“Want to go for a ride?”

She looked at him, and he could tell she was slightly alarmed but mostly intrigued and excited and delighted. “Where?”

“Welllllllll, anywhere you want, eventually. But right now: Nestene Consciousness.”

It was back again, that teeth-tongue smile. “Okay,” she said.

***

“I would add ‘wobbly’ to your description,” whispered Rose, as they looked down at the Nestene Consciousness. She looked at him. He was pulling out a vial. “What’s that?”

“It’s a stopper for semisynthetic amorphous organic solids, polymers of high molecular mass. ‘Anti-plastic,’ to put it more simply.”

“Anti-plastic?” echoed Rose.

“Yeah, you sound like you don’t believe me. From the same blokes that make anti-matter. Fantastic company.”

Rose shook her head a bit. “Okay, well, pour it in.”

He shook his head. “No. It gets one chance.” He turned to her. “Stay here, stay out of sight.” Then he stood and walked confidently toward the Nestene Consciousness, hands in his pockets. “Am I addressing the Nestene Consciousness?”

The blob of plastic answered in what Rose assumed was the affirmative.

“Excellent. So. Here on a spot of planetary destruction?” The Doctor sounded almost casual, but, upon the blobbering of the plastic, turned sharp, and Rose shivered in reaction. “Don’t blather about constitutional rights, this is an invasion. And you are going to stop it. Right now. Stop it and leave or you won’t like what happens next.” There was a pause while the plastic blobbered again. “I’m the Doctor,” he spat out, and then paused again to listen. “If I were you, I really wouldn’t bring that up,” he said, his voice dangerously low. He reached into his pocket, at the same moment that Rose realized two mannequins had come up behind him.

“Doctor!” she shouted.

He looked up at her, startled, and the mannequins grabbed hold of him. There was a bit of a scuffle, and Rose didn’t give herself time to think. She grabbed the chain nearest her and swung out over the glowing liquid plastic, solidly catching one mannequin and dumping him into the swirl of the blob. The Doctor, staggering slightly but one side now free, succeeded in grabbing his vial of anti-plastic and dumping it into the Nestene Consciousness.

Then he turned to Rose in amazement, catching her on her backswing.

“Bronze medal,” she said, grinning at him. “Jericho Street Junior School under 7s gymnastic team.”

Molto bene,” he grinned back. “Now.” He slid his hand into hers. “Run.”

***

He was waiting for her, leaning up against his ship that looked like a box, hands in his pockets. His face was in shadows, and it was impossible to discern anything but the fact that his eyes were locked on her intensely.

“Everyone safe and sound?” he asked, as she came up to him.

She nodded. “What’s a police public call box?”

“Oh.” He glanced up at his ship. “It’s a disguise.”

“So.”

“So.”

“Did we save the world today?”

“We did.”

“Yeah. Pretty typical day, really.”

He smiled. “Come with me.”

She went still. “What?”

“Come with me.” He nodded toward the ship he was leaning on.

“Are you mad?”

He said nothing. He tipped one of those lethal smiles at her.

“What are you?” she asked.

He pushed off of the ship, walked over to her, took her hand. “The ground beneath our feet is spinning at a thousand miles an hour, and the entire planet is hurtling around the sun at sixty-seven thousand miles an hour. Can you feel it?”

She stared up at him. “No,” she whispered.

“I can. Come with me.”

“I have a…” She was going to say boyfriend. She settled for, “life.”

“You do. So why not live it? Anywhere in space and time, anywhere you like, we can go.” He paused. “In the blink of an eye.”

Author's Note: It's "Rose," re-told with Ten. I didn't want to give it all away in the top Author's Note, but EdgeofWorld's prompt was to put Ten in a Nine episode or Nine in a Ten episode. I went with this, and attempted to come up with a Doctor who had gotten to his tenth self without having met Rose. I thought he might have turned out manipulatively seductive, the way he is in flashes during S3 and S4. Anyway, quarrel, debate, tell me when you knew it was supposed to be Ten, tell me that you were just confused the whole way through!

 


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Date: 2010-01-09 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catyuy.livejournal.com
Very interesting take.
I'll have to reread it while imagine DT instead of CE.

Date: 2010-01-16 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Yes, it's odd how you have to re-order what your brain was thinking, isn't it?

Date: 2010-01-09 02:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meremoon.livejournal.com
Well, this line definitely had me a bit WTF:

“It’s like a big pile of…gobbledy-gook-goo-smush-liquidy-glowing…stuff.”

and when I got to the "molto bene" I was definitely wondering if it was supposed to be Ten, or if your characterization of Nine was just *really* bad. I'm glad to say it was the former.

This is an intriguing idea, I may have to give it some thought myself...

Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2010-01-09 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitsune17.livejournal.com
See, I'm so thick I didn't get that it was Ten, not Nine. I spent a good four minutes or so trying to imagine Nine saying "molto bene".

It's kind of hilarious, actually.

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Date: 2010-01-09 02:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldencinders.livejournal.com
ooo! that was cool :) I'd like to read more of this kind of fic.

Date: 2010-01-16 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Thanks! It was an interesting writing exercise, coming up with a Ten who was exclusively mine, really.

Date: 2010-01-09 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orelle-peredhil.livejournal.com
Hee! I knew it was Ten (*wibbles*) at the babbling (so from the first paragraph!), and at the mention of him messing with his fringe. Aha, I thought, Nine doesn't have a fringe! Or not enough of one to mess with, anyway. I like the idea of him being a sexily manipulative bugger right from the start, and I really wonder what Rose would have done with that. Would he have pulled her in as much, or would she have gotten sick of it real quick? V interesting!
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Date: 2010-01-16 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Ha! His babbling does give it away! I was trying to think of all the main differences I could throw in there to establish it was Ten and not Nine. The fringe, of course, was a big one. ;-)

I find it interesting, the idea that Rose might not have been as taken with a Doctor who was Ten first rather than her Nine. Actually, I find that *really* interesting. ::thinks thinky thoughts::

Date: 2010-01-09 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yanks-02.livejournal.com
Hee, yeah I figured it out when she mentioned the hair. You know how Ten is with his hair!

I quite liked it. I'm glad it didn't happen this way (which is not something I can often say about your stories!) because I love Nine and think Rose and the Doctor are a much better couple because she had to deal with and fall in love with Nine first. It would have been much too easy with Ten first.

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Date: 2010-01-09 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skywaterblue.livejournal.com
I thought it was Ten from the beginning, then got confused after it became Rose, and then I realized what you had done with: “It’s like a big pile of…gobbledy-gook-goo-smush-liquidy-glowing…stuff.”

Date: 2010-01-16 02:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Heh. This was almost like a wibbly-wobbly-timey-whimey fic!

Date: 2010-01-09 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] susanb03.livejournal.com
Well the author's explain why it felt 'off' for 9. I get it now. Good job.

Date: 2010-01-16 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
lol - Yeah, this was a tough one. I feel like it needed an a/n but I didn't want to give it all away in the beginning.

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Date: 2010-01-09 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] debs7.livejournal.com
As soon as you mentioned him fussing with his fringe I knew it was Ten.

Lovely story :)

Date: 2010-01-10 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Thanks! Ten's obsession with his fringe is a dead giveaway, isn't it?

Date: 2010-01-09 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] outforawalk.livejournal.com
HA! I didn't really read the author notes and it took me a minute to realize both that Ten was the Doctor in this one and that there weren't going to be any kids yet. Heh. It's like when you're little and your parents tell a story and you think, "Why aren't I in the story?!" Only not I, but the kids. :)

Date: 2010-01-10 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Hahahaha! Yes, a story without kids?! Written by *me*?!

Date: 2010-01-09 03:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crimedoc1.livejournal.com
“It’s my…secret…weapon…device…thingy.”

*giggle*

No way Nine would say that!

Although I had my suspicions in the first paragraph when the Doctor was babbling on about blinking and dry eyes and weeping angels. Nine doesn't babble the way Ten does.

Date: 2010-01-10 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
It was an interesting experience to write this, because I wanted to make sure that I really played up the differences between the Doctors, to make "Rose" as different as possible. So letting him have a babble at the very beginning, and imagining how he would describe the sonic screwdriver differently, were great fun.

Date: 2010-01-09 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erikau.livejournal.com
Intriguing. I did wonder why your Nine was a little 'off'.

I could actually picture Nine referring to his secret weapon device thingy (in one of his goofier moments.) His mild reaction to Jackie in her dressing gown puzzled me slightly. The hair arranging made me think of Ten, but by the time he said 'molto bene', I just wondered why Nine was using the wrong catchphrase.

Date: 2010-01-10 02:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Yes, I thought there was a possibility that people might just think I was writing a terrible Nine, so I added the A/N at the end to try to clarify.

Supposedly, RTD claims he did not write Nine and Ten any differently, so I think, theoretically, we're supposed to be able to imagine Nine doing all of the things Ten does. But I just think Ten was way more casual about, well, being sexy, than Nine was.

Date: 2010-01-09 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] principia.livejournal.com
Hee!

Of course, I was picturing him in the original Hamlet outfit rather than the brown suit, or mayhaps the recent jacket. And he was whipping out that husky purr on a regular basis - especially during the spinning-earth speech. Mrowr.


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Date: 2010-01-10 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] acciochocolate.livejournal.com
Someone needs to put that man in Regency garb!

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Date: 2010-01-09 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sapphire-child.livejournal.com
As soon as he started playing with his hair I knew :D that's so very Ten.

Date: 2010-01-10 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Ah, Ten's hair obsession gives him away every time!

Date: 2010-01-09 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meralee82.livejournal.com
“Doesn’t matter.” The Doctor pulled the arm out of his pocket. “I’m going to reverse the polarity.”


I. Love. You. :)

Date: 2010-01-10 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
lol - It's all-purpose!

Date: 2010-01-09 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fishface44.livejournal.com
I suspected it was Ten when he winked at Jackie, but I knew For Sure when he fussed with his hair! I love the Rose episode anyway, and it is every bit as gorgeous with Ten! Thank you!!!!

Favorite line: The Doctor, suddenly, understood the expression blink of an eye.

Date: 2010-01-10 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Yes, I liked the idea that Ten would have been so cheeky as to wink at Jackie there. Nine kind of flirts with her and then cuts her off, but I see Ten as opportunistic enough not to foreclose anything.

And I also liked the idea that all Doctors are blindsided by Rose's impact on them, even one as self-assured as the Tenth Doctor I've imagined here.

Date: 2010-01-09 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostmoon71.livejournal.com
I figured it out when you mentioned the fringe of hair--but I definitely noticed a difference earlier, in his reaction to Jackie.

This was a fun approach. I'd love to read more!

Date: 2010-01-10 02:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Thanks! I admit it was a lot of fun to write! It was like building a whole new character!

Date: 2010-01-09 05:30 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] captaintish
Okay, I figured out that it was Ten when she said "There was an explosion." And he said, "Welllllll...." :)

I guess I should have figured it out when he said, “It’s my…secret…weapon…device…thingy.”

You did a good job with this, although I'm such a huge Nine fan that it's slightly disturbing to picture Ten in that episode. lol.

Thanks for sharing with all of us!

Date: 2010-01-10 02:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Ha! Yeah, the "wellllll...." is just so DT, you can't imagine another actor delivering it, can you?

I agree that it's a bit disturbing, but it's fascinating to imagine how the dynamic would have changed.

Date: 2010-01-09 05:41 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Knew it had to be Ten when you mentioned Rose catching him fussing with his hair, as Nine's really couldn't be changed into anything it wasn't.

Date: 2010-01-10 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Yeah, fussing with Nine's hair wouldn't have had much of a point, really...

Date: 2010-01-09 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyofgallifrey.livejournal.com
I saw "Rose" and automatically applied my Nine/CE filter. Never occurred to me it might be Ten. Sigh. I think I'm becoming clueless. I never passed Timey-Wimey 101 either...

Date: 2010-01-10 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
lol - I assumed it wouldn't be caught, which is why I added the A/N at the end.

Date: 2010-01-09 06:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emraldeyedauter.livejournal.com
I got caught too but eventually figured it out. WOnderful retelling and although I love the original I think this is funny. Well done.

Date: 2010-01-10 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Thanks! It was a fun little exercise.

Date: 2010-01-09 06:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] othermewriter.livejournal.com
I figured it was probably 10 when he was playing with his fringe.

Date: 2010-01-16 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Honestly, that man and his hair. ;-)

Date: 2010-01-09 07:46 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] glory_jean
That was cool.

I should figured it out when he winked at Jackie or at the "welll" but it was the fussing with the fringe in the mirror that did it. At that point it clicked and I had to go back to the beginning and start again with the right Doctor in mind.

:D
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Date: 2010-01-16 02:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
lol - I love all the moments that people are telling me were the giveaways (or should have been). Writing the Jackie scene with Ten instead of Nine was so interesting. Really, this whole thing was fascinating.

Date: 2010-01-09 12:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catsfiction.livejournal.com
As with several others, it was the hair bit that did it for me. Liked the first few paragraphs - they were very authentically Ten's voice (though I thought he might be remembering it at the time).

The one bit I really miss is, "Lots of planets have a North!"

Date: 2010-01-16 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Ah, yes, no North comment when it's Ten we're dealing with. ;-)

I can see how the first paragraphs could easily have been Ten looking back on the whole thing. And possibly were I to write Ten looking back on the whole thing, it would sound very similar.

Date: 2010-01-09 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asahifirsa.livejournal.com
I must be really thick because I didn't notice. I was wondering why he bothers with his fringe because there is none and then I was wondering if he'd ever said "molto bene" as Nine. But in retrospect, it all makes sense :)

Date: 2010-01-09 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asahifirsa.livejournal.com
And I just re-read the first bit and it's so Ten that I feel even thicker now. Pretty much from the first full sentence he says to Rose :)

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Date: 2010-01-09 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessalrynn.livejournal.com
I got it. I saw Ten... because Rose fell harder and faster, and because she wasn't as afraid of him because he was closer to her age, so she didn't freak out. And he was hot in a way she understood...

I think it was completely brilliant! Thanks to you and EdgeofWorld for sharing it with us!

Date: 2010-01-16 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
It's true: Rose can process Ten so much better than Nine, I think partly because of how he looks and partly because Ten is just better at manipulating people, to be quite honest.

Glad you enjoyed it!
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